I just wanted to say I LOVE the foreshadowing in this. The thing with the crown, Calder finding Cole instead of Marrow, the (redacted) hiding as a (redacted) in the crowd, Artemi being worried being stripped of her status as well... I hope we get more info on Sidd's dad soon too. His genes are strong in his kid. After so many fvn dating sims, I'm just so glad to be reading just, a compelling story
Okay first, i know it is just ment as a funny joke ,a throw away gag....but am i the only one who finds the fact that Artemi was ready to accept a proposal from a noble she barely knew for more then two days slightly concerning. xD
I feel like Clyde's heart is gonna break again since he still loves Cole but I'd rather that than throwing away Sidd/Cole since it's a development that we actually see. Though imma be honest... Relationships feel like the C plot for this novel and shouldn't be in the spotlight, but that's just me
Love this, genuinely had parts where I teared up, definitely one of the best visual novels I've played. Quick question, what's the name of the audio that plays here. I wanna save the audio because I love how it sounds.
he yeah it was so cute to see how much Cole cares about SIdd . the audio is called sidd-theme you can find it open the TB open the Game folder and than the Audio folder should be file 72 hope i was able to help you
i am glad i was able to help you . idk if you also play repeat but in case its the same as with TB there also is a Audio folder with all the music files . haha yeah i hope the both become more . i also think we will see a turn in the relationship of Cole and Calder later.
wish you fun to listen to all the beautiful music
Spoiler i guess:
i think Calders grandpa also is Coles in the end of Capter 3 you see a family portrait with i am preety sure about it ( but its only waht i guess) Gaius in the back Calders Mom in the front another Hyena on the left (you look at the portrait) and another person/Hyena who i think it could be Marrow . as we know Marrows sister died and also Calders mom .Marrow named his Axe ( translation: sisters voice ) Calder tells a bit about his uncle and Gaius seems to have an interest into Cole as the meet in the Tavern. and it would fix the Rumor of Marrow once was a nobel/member of a nobel Fam and leaves his home since Gaius /his Father seems to be/was an asshole and it would also explain why Marrow dont realy like magic , so i bet my ass on it . Calder is Coles Cousin
I'm nearly finished T.B (Tempation's Ballad) and I do plan to play Repeat as well. Plus I figured that was the case i the relationship between the Hyenas
ah i see and wish you a good time during you play Repeat . i guess we will see how it wil turn out with T.B moving on , also could imagine Calder as a part of the "party" since he is/would be the Offensive Magic guy so Cole would be the Magic support . Sidd the warrior and Artemi the Knight/magic one and thinking about older Role play games like FF the adventure Party most times had Four Members but like i say i guess we will find out a soon as T.B story moves on . i wish you fun and a good time play the rest of T.B and with playing Repeat
Yeah! This honestly one of the most heartwarming scenes in TB, I really love seeing Sidd and Cole's dynamic, it's so nice to see them warm up to each other!
To answer your question, most of shirokoi's character themes are inspired by chinese songs. The song that plays during this scene sounds very similar to 爱情转移 or Love Transfer by Eason Chan. Hope this helps!
i love this VN and for me it has the same place in my heart as Repeat everything is a 10/10 i just love how you just play / read throw it and just dive into the world and also how every charakter grows ( in many ways XD) also loved the new update and cant wait for more . a BIG THANK YOU for creating those wonderfull Novels and storys for us . wish you the best and like i say cant wait for more updates
the cover art showing each of their weapons/tools is NIIIIIICE.
slight spoilers.
Artemi's shield, and Sidd's halberd are real weapons, And Malus being there, representing Cole's weapon is something I wanted to point out. Also I just realized, if Cole wasnt playing his lute, it would probably have been their either in place of or with Malus.
I've played Repeat and I loved it but I'd never really given a try to this VN, till today and it's sooooo good. I can't believe I've been missing out on this great story and spicy NSFW scenes!
Honestly, I'd argue non-m/m people should also read this. You can skip the nsfw stuff too. Plus, f/m on-screen scenes have been around forever, they can handle some risque m/m scenes if we can sit through those
Are you back to updating this game? This has probably been my favorite vn of all time so i randomly came back to check on it. Hyped if so! im gonna reread it either way lol. love how much personality it has
Time to check this one out. I just finished Repeat, and I'm hoping this game is on the same standards of making me cry as Repeat was. I'll come back to you guys after I finish this one.
I've tried alot of VN's before, and i have to say this one is so far the best. Took me exactly a Week to finish the first 3 chapters, the amount of entertainment and emotions i've got during this Week were amazing! Can't wait for chapter 4! Tho I would love to see a more romantic relationship between the two boys in the future. Guess that is the only part where i would have hoped for more. Otherwise great Novel!
This game is just perfect. Especially in terms of story. Didn't expect such deep lore but it is AMAZING. And I hope you're gonna add more to this game very soon. I started playing like a week ago and I'm completely addicted. And out of all the story and visual novel games I've played, this game got me in tears. Their struggles couldn't have been more relatable than this. I'm looking forward to see this game getting finished, good luck! Also, a question, have many chapters are you planning to make in total?
Thank you for the kind words! I'm planning around 12 to 15 chapters for the entirety of TB's story, but that's kinda subject to change as the project progresses.
Hey, kinda stupid question but are you releasing updates by chapter or by piece of chapter? or does it just depend [kinda found this vn after it got updated to the state it is in rn, aka after graphics overhaul; basically got kind of hooked on this one because it's so cool, all the characters fulfill some kind of role and all, the main cast is so wow in general]
I absolutely ADORE this game, it is already my favorite visual novel despite my hunch that it isn't even CLOSE to being finished. I would go into extreme detail about what I love with each character and the scene progression, but this is not the place to write spoilers, so I'll stay general.
First off, the game's concept and plot are amazing thus far. I LOVE your spin of the D&D medieval trope and how fluidly you execute clever comedic points along with serious moments as well. The creativity behind so many of the scenes within this novel is baffling, and a few also got me close to crying a few times.
Every character is unique and developed so that their actions make sense, making emotional moments that much more powerful, it even makes the humorous moments funnier as well. There are also so many adorable moments that I still cannot get enough of.
A little more specific, but the parental influence and relationships are all incredibly executed. You have it down to a T for certain parent-child dynamics and how it affects the child. I recognize your dedication to this part of each character's development very gratefully.
I am so so thrilled about the resuming of this vn's development, I have been eagerly waiting for it since the pausing for Repeat's focus. Shiro, you have an incredible story going here that presses all the right buttons, and I look forward to future updates.
Sidd and Cole haven’t trained or delved too deep into their Fighter/Bard classes, so they haven’t committed to a subclass yet. This will change as the story progresses.
I mean, so far in the 150,000 word script there are a total of 3 sex scenes, all of which are skippable and I even made the effort the add character moments in those scenes.
I understand that not everyone is comfortable with sex in their media, but not all media is made for everyone and that’s okay.
Hey, man, I was wondering if the work is back up to date? I have only recently come across this work and have finished the second chapter. It was really good, but I was disappointed to see it down to the last chapter. I really love it and would love to see it updated. Anyway, thank you for letting me read such a beautiful story.
I think that the developer just finished the first route on their other game, "Repeat" ( I HIGHLY HIGHLY recommend playing it!), and I think they have shift their focus over to this game for the time being! (not 100% sure tho)
I think he did say that he's going to work on TB for a bit more and pushing out updates to this VN (I think that's what I really remembered?) so yes it's kinda back from hiatus and back up to date
One of my favorite VNs. Calling it an underrated gem might be inaccurate, since it's pretty high on the top-rated page-- but it deserves so much more attention than it has. Great action-comedy. Puts you off guard, then hits you with seriously well-constructed emotional beats. I recommend this to everyone I know, and anxiously await its return.
Alright I got a small request, since the app is unstable on my phone, I decided to run it on the JoiPay app (it worked) but to hide the text, I gotta use the small wheel, which is the only button that's not available on the gamepad settings 💀 is it possible to add a lil hide button in there? Clicking on the left side could unhide it too
Pfft! Well, it's just the orca guy remembering him after fighting Sidd in the arena. (if I remember correctly, since it's been about a year since I played it)
You did not disappoint some of us lol you confused us with the orca flash back thinking it was the father of sidd that fought the same orca before sidd did
I'm not an expert in DnD, but I doubt he would be level 10. He just started being an adventurer and has no weapon training. If anything, he is probably level 1 by default
Finally took the time to read the visual novel from chapters 1 to 3. Looking forward to any future updates.
Overall, it's a very wonderful fantasy story. Interesting fantasy worldbuilding. Tender, occasionally sobering, often funny, and... optimistic.
The main trio are sympathetic and unique in their own ways, but they really shine when they bounce off each other and the colorful supporting cast. I find the character dynamics to be very compelling and well-written. Plenty of humor on the side, such as the 'reading it for the plot' gag, Sidd's harem, plus everything to do with Sidd's mom having a super hardcore renegade bard past (and present). Plus the pompous Carter guy who swiftly got beat up by Cole, Artemi and Sidd's mother (I hope he sticks around as a comic side character on the side. Can't say I wish the same for the street urchin, all things considered. That kid's long overdue for some slapstick.)
Cole's archetype (charming, flirty bard guy who is super casual about physical intimacy because he's just as equally against anything to do emotional stuff, much like his dads in that regard) isn't exactly new compared to certain prominent characters from to Critical Role / Vox Machina or Helluva Boss... but I really like Cole's role in the story because his best moments come from bouncing off of Sidd and Artemi. Didn't find Vox Machina or Helluva Boss to be super compelling in that regard (with B x S being 80% horny and 20% drama), but I like how it was used in Temptation's Ballad. Sidd's earnest nature was enough to nudge Cole into stepping in the role of a responsible leader and mentor (I doubt that Cole would have stopped to help just anyone read using bardic imagery), and Artemi was... the first person, narratively wise, who firmly shoved Cole into taking the additional steps of that better path when she yelled at him and threatened to punch him for wanting to abandon Sidd in chapter 1. Considering all of the baggage Cole had regarding his fathers and himself (given that one of them was the fun dad so the other had to be the nagging house-dad), Artemi really broke through his inward-facing melancholy in a way that nobody else did before then.
Sidd is a relatable character with understandable fears and struggles that come from a humble mind with a humble upbringing. It could be said that he has... slightly less baggage than the rest of the team, but that doesn't mean his feelings are any less important. He's already come a long way, mentally and emotionally, over the course of the three chapters, and it was becuase fate put him on a crash course with two unlikely non-frog friends. He found the will and the resolve to harness the physical strength he already had to begin with, he's made a great number of friends and acquaintances, and he's also acted as a stabilizing positive influence for Cole and Artemi.
And... I really like Artemi. Noble crusader with a huge dorky side... I'm fairly certain it's been done often enough, but I haven't seen a crusader who really stuck out in the sea of fantasy literature. Not since Lalatina Ford Dustiness, and she's mostly a designated gag character. Artemi's very passionate about chivalry and duty... and is thus the source of countless gags where her sheltered worldview clashes with everyone she meets and everything she witnesses. Especially the adults only library section. And as much as Cole pushes Artemi out of her comfort zone, she was very quick to start pushing back in funny ways once she got to know him better. Through Cole and Sidd and their families, Artemi gained a very strong and supportive network to lean on, and I wish her the best with her personal journey.
TB is currently being worked on! There's been a few small QOL updates on the Patreon that include a UI overhaul, gallery menu, and some other small tidbits. They will be available to the public in about a month or so!
Im just thinking. What if the house of shannesy or whatever guy gets an inn. But its the bone breaker tavern. And im just thinking about what if this happened. anyways good story staple of approval
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HOLD UP IS COLE MISSING A LEG ON THE MAIN MENU??? HOW HAVEN'T I NOTICED THAT BEFORE?!?
ms girl it could be just folded
I tried rewinding it and speeding it up again and again to see if it fixed the crooked image, but it just kept ROTATING MORE hahahaha
I love this, idk why, but I feel like I should report the bug anyways
I just wanted to say I LOVE the foreshadowing in this. The thing with the crown, Calder finding Cole instead of Marrow, the (redacted) hiding as a (redacted) in the crowd, Artemi being worried being stripped of her status as well... I hope we get more info on Sidd's dad soon too. His genes are strong in his kid. After so many fvn dating sims, I'm just so glad to be reading just, a compelling story
Slight spoiler to latest update:
Okay first, i know it is just ment as a funny joke ,a throw away gag....but am i the only one who finds the fact that Artemi was ready to accept a proposal from a noble she barely knew for more then two days slightly concerning. xD
So... is there gonna be an Artemi route? (Sorry, I need to ask)
Not likely considering its seems to be pretty much complete m/m.
Kinda like the other VN repeat the Shirokoi made which is only m/m.
Not to mention it's fairly linear and doesn't even seem to have routes like a dating game would. It's just a story and it's great
and that's so sad, because I would love the option to date Clyde too but the story is headed towards the badger probably...
anyways, it's a really good story tho!
I feel like Clyde's heart is gonna break again since he still loves Cole but I'd rather that than throwing away Sidd/Cole since it's a development that we actually see. Though imma be honest... Relationships feel like the C plot for this novel and shouldn't be in the spotlight, but that's just me
love the way Cole helped work with Sidd to allow him to read without dyslexia getting in the way! :D
Love this, genuinely had parts where I teared up, definitely one of the best visual novels I've played. Quick question, what's the name of the audio that plays here. I wanna save the audio because I love how it sounds.
he yeah it was so cute to see how much Cole cares about SIdd . the audio is called sidd-theme you can find it open the TB open the Game folder and than the Audio folder should be file 72 hope i was able to help you
It really did! Thank you! I also agree with you, I like seeing Cole care about Sidd so much
i am glad i was able to help you . idk if you also play repeat but in case its the same as with TB there also is a Audio folder with all the music files . haha yeah i hope the both become more . i also think we will see a turn in the relationship of Cole and Calder later.
wish you fun to listen to all the beautiful music
Spoiler i guess:
i think Calders grandpa also is Coles in the end of Capter 3 you see a family portrait with i am preety sure about it ( but its only waht i guess) Gaius in the back Calders Mom in the front another Hyena on the left (you look at the portrait) and another person/Hyena who i think it could be Marrow . as we know Marrows sister died and also Calders mom .Marrow named his Axe ( translation: sisters voice ) Calder tells a bit about his uncle and Gaius seems to have an interest into Cole as the meet in the Tavern. and it would fix the Rumor of Marrow once was a nobel/member of a nobel Fam and leaves his home since Gaius /his Father seems to be/was an asshole and it would also explain why Marrow dont realy like magic , so i bet my ass on it . Calder is Coles Cousin
I'm nearly finished T.B (Tempation's Ballad) and I do plan to play Repeat as well. Plus I figured that was the case i the relationship between the Hyenas
ah i see and wish you a good time during you play Repeat . i guess we will see how it wil turn out with T.B moving on , also could imagine Calder as a part of the "party" since he is/would be the Offensive Magic guy so Cole would be the Magic support . Sidd the warrior and Artemi the Knight/magic one and thinking about older Role play games like FF the adventure Party most times had Four Members but like i say i guess we will find out a soon as T.B story moves on . i wish you fun and a good time play the rest of T.B and with playing Repeat
Yeah! This honestly one of the most heartwarming scenes in TB, I really love seeing Sidd and Cole's dynamic, it's so nice to see them warm up to each other!
To answer your question, most of shirokoi's character themes are inspired by chinese songs. The song that plays during this scene sounds very similar to 爱情转移 or Love Transfer by Eason Chan. Hope this helps!
i love this VN and for me it has the same place in my heart as Repeat everything is a 10/10 i just love how you just play / read throw it and just dive into the world and also how every charakter grows ( in many ways XD) also loved the new update and cant wait for more . a BIG THANK YOU for creating those wonderfull Novels and storys for us . wish you the best and like i say cant wait for more updates
the cover art showing each of their weapons/tools is NIIIIIICE.
slight spoilers.
Artemi's shield, and Sidd's halberd are real weapons, And Malus being there, representing Cole's weapon is something I wanted to point out. Also I just realized, if Cole wasnt playing his lute, it would probably have been their either in place of or with Malus.
I've played Repeat and I loved it but I'd never really given a try to this VN, till today and it's sooooo good. I can't believe I've been missing out on this great story and spicy NSFW scenes!
10/10 every MLM furry must play ! OwO
Honestly, I'd argue non-m/m people should also read this. You can skip the nsfw stuff too. Plus, f/m on-screen scenes have been around forever, they can handle some risque m/m scenes if we can sit through those
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Are you back to updating this game? This has probably been my favorite vn of all time so i randomly came back to check on it. Hyped if so! im gonna reread it either way lol. love how much personality it has
Time to check this one out. I just finished Repeat, and I'm hoping this game is on the same standards of making me cry as Repeat was. I'll come back to you guys after I finish this one.
I've tried alot of VN's before, and i have to say this one is so far the best. Took me exactly a Week to finish the first 3 chapters, the amount of entertainment and emotions i've got during this Week were amazing! Can't wait for chapter 4! Tho I would love to see a more romantic relationship between the two boys in the future. Guess that is the only part where i would have hoped for more. Otherwise great Novel!
This game is just perfect. Especially in terms of story. Didn't expect such deep lore but it is AMAZING. And I hope you're gonna add more to this game very soon. I started playing like a week ago and I'm completely addicted. And out of all the story and visual novel games I've played, this game got me in tears. Their struggles couldn't have been more relatable than this. I'm looking forward to see this game getting finished, good luck! Also, a question, have many chapters are you planning to make in total?
Thank you for the kind words! I'm planning around 12 to 15 chapters for the entirety of TB's story, but that's kinda subject to change as the project progresses.
Hey, kinda stupid question but are you releasing updates by chapter or by piece of chapter? or does it just depend [kinda found this vn after it got updated to the state it is in rn, aka after graphics overhaul; basically got kind of hooked on this one because it's so cool, all the characters fulfill some kind of role and all, the main cast is so wow in general]
I'm currently releasing updates bit by bit, optimistically aiming for once every 1.5 months or so, though smaller updates may come out faster.
noice
I absolutely ADORE this game, it is already my favorite visual novel despite my hunch that it isn't even CLOSE to being finished. I would go into extreme detail about what I love with each character and the scene progression, but this is not the place to write spoilers, so I'll stay general.
First off, the game's concept and plot are amazing thus far. I LOVE your spin of the D&D medieval trope and how fluidly you execute clever comedic points along with serious moments as well. The creativity behind so many of the scenes within this novel is baffling, and a few also got me close to crying a few times.
Every character is unique and developed so that their actions make sense, making emotional moments that much more powerful, it even makes the humorous moments funnier as well. There are also so many adorable moments that I still cannot get enough of.
A little more specific, but the parental influence and relationships are all incredibly executed. You have it down to a T for certain parent-child dynamics and how it affects the child. I recognize your dedication to this part of each character's development very gratefully.
I am so so thrilled about the resuming of this vn's development, I have been eagerly waiting for it since the pausing for Repeat's focus. Shiro, you have an incredible story going here that presses all the right buttons, and I look forward to future updates.
Do Cole or Sidd have subclasses?
The Chapter 1 character glossary doesn't include the subclasses, unlike the ones from chapter 2 and 3
We know Artemi is a Tempest Domain Cleric and Oath of Devotion Paladin, even though it isn't mentioned in the glossary
Sidd and Cole haven’t trained or delved too deep into their Fighter/Bard classes, so they haven’t committed to a subclass yet. This will change as the story progresses.
Have you considered making a completely SFW build/version of the game? I wanna recommend it to people but it's kinda hard when it has so much gay sex
I mean, so far in the 150,000 word script there are a total of 3 sex scenes, all of which are skippable and I even made the effort the add character moments in those scenes.
I understand that not everyone is comfortable with sex in their media, but not all media is made for everyone and that’s okay.
I understand, it's just that I feel like I'd die of embarassment if I recomended this to people and I really want to!
Then perish!
from embarrassment!
nah but seriously it is skippable, which is actually a cool little mechanic
one of my friends recommended me The Boys. There's probably more wieners in that than this lol
The amount of nudity and sex scenes in modern media would dwarf the few scenes we have here 😂 they'll be fiiine
Hey, man, I was wondering if the work is back up to date? I have only recently come across this work and have finished the second chapter. It was really good, but I was disappointed to see it down to the last chapter. I really love it and would love to see it updated. Anyway, thank you for letting me read such a beautiful story.
Sorry, English is not my native language, I hope the translator did not misinterpret my meaning.
I think that the developer just finished the first route on their other game, "Repeat" ( I HIGHLY HIGHLY recommend playing it!), and I think they have shift their focus over to this game for the time being! (not 100% sure tho)
I think he did say that he's going to work on TB for a bit more and pushing out updates to this VN (I think that's what I really remembered?) so yes it's kinda back from hiatus and back up to date
The existing NSFW scenes in the game would have animation
the first substory has an animated one.
I just happened to check back on this today and we're SO back omg
Hmm, something seems wrong here-
Ah sorry, this is a known bug that has been fixed in the next build on Patreon qwq
It's alive..... ITS FU***** ALIVE!!!!!!!!
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One of my favorite VNs. Calling it an underrated gem might be inaccurate, since it's pretty high on the top-rated page-- but it deserves so much more attention than it has. Great action-comedy. Puts you off guard, then hits you with seriously well-constructed emotional beats. I recommend this to everyone I know, and anxiously await its return.
Alright I got a small request, since the app is unstable on my phone, I decided to run it on the JoiPay app (it worked) but to hide the text, I gotta use the small wheel, which is the only button that's not available on the gamepad settings 💀 is it possible to add a lil hide button in there? Clicking on the left side could unhide it too
Is there a button to hide the text?
You just need to press that scroll wheel
Ty
This feature has been added in the latest update!
Wooo!! Thank you
In DnD terms what level is everyone
Artemi can upcast dispell magic to level 4
Cole i think the highest spell he casted was a level 2
Sidd idk how to rate a fighter class level in DnD
Sidd is probably level 10+
That guy can beat anyone's ass to a pulp, he just needs more confidence in himself.
SPOILERS:
Can't wait to see more lore about that guy who looks like him (forgot his name ^^'). I think he might be his biological father.
the who???? did i miss an entire scene on my playthrough
Pfft! Well, it's just the orca guy remembering him after fighting Sidd in the arena. (if I remember correctly, since it's been about a year since I played it)
ohh HIM
Spoiler
It's his biological mother that shirokoi drew too masculine.
i thought it was his mom just i did not remeber
Well shit... Thanks for clarifying. I'm too gay to see boobs
I didn't notice anything myself. Just saw Shirokoi mentioning it.
I was tasked with drawing a hot woman and I think I succeeded 👍
You did not disappoint some of us lol you confused us with the orca flash back thinking it was the father of sidd that fought the same orca before sidd did
Well that was the general idea I was going for (except Mels is a woman lol) so I consider it a decent success.
In a way, yes, very much. We cannot complain, heh.
Also, can't wait to build a harem and taste every cake *perverted gay laughter*
if you mean the flashback with the orca pirate guy, that was actually his mother
I'm not an expert in DnD, but I doubt he would be level 10. He just started being an adventurer and has no weapon training. If anything, he is probably level 1 by default
I'm still replaying this, it's really fun
still honestly floored by Hamish's fight scene against Zelos, my god dad #2 is such a badass.
Finally took the time to read the visual novel from chapters 1 to 3. Looking forward to any future updates.
Overall, it's a very wonderful fantasy story. Interesting fantasy worldbuilding. Tender, occasionally sobering, often funny, and... optimistic.
The main trio are sympathetic and unique in their own ways, but they really shine when they bounce off each other and the colorful supporting cast. I find the character dynamics to be very compelling and well-written. Plenty of humor on the side, such as the 'reading it for the plot' gag, Sidd's harem, plus everything to do with Sidd's mom having a super hardcore renegade bard past (and present). Plus the pompous Carter guy who swiftly got beat up by Cole, Artemi and Sidd's mother (I hope he sticks around as a comic side character on the side. Can't say I wish the same for the street urchin, all things considered. That kid's long overdue for some slapstick.)
Cole's archetype (charming, flirty bard guy who is super casual about physical intimacy because he's just as equally against anything to do emotional stuff, much like his dads in that regard) isn't exactly new compared to certain prominent characters from to Critical Role / Vox Machina or Helluva Boss... but I really like Cole's role in the story because his best moments come from bouncing off of Sidd and Artemi. Didn't find Vox Machina or Helluva Boss to be super compelling in that regard (with B x S being 80% horny and 20% drama), but I like how it was used in Temptation's Ballad. Sidd's earnest nature was enough to nudge Cole into stepping in the role of a responsible leader and mentor (I doubt that Cole would have stopped to help just anyone read using bardic imagery), and Artemi was... the first person, narratively wise, who firmly shoved Cole into taking the additional steps of that better path when she yelled at him and threatened to punch him for wanting to abandon Sidd in chapter 1. Considering all of the baggage Cole had regarding his fathers and himself (given that one of them was the fun dad so the other had to be the nagging house-dad), Artemi really broke through his inward-facing melancholy in a way that nobody else did before then.
Sidd is a relatable character with understandable fears and struggles that come from a humble mind with a humble upbringing. It could be said that he has... slightly less baggage than the rest of the team, but that doesn't mean his feelings are any less important. He's already come a long way, mentally and emotionally, over the course of the three chapters, and it was becuase fate put him on a crash course with two unlikely non-frog friends. He found the will and the resolve to harness the physical strength he already had to begin with, he's made a great number of friends and acquaintances, and he's also acted as a stabilizing positive influence for Cole and Artemi.
And... I really like Artemi. Noble crusader with a huge dorky side... I'm fairly certain it's been done often enough, but I haven't seen a crusader who really stuck out in the sea of fantasy literature. Not since Lalatina Ford Dustiness, and she's mostly a designated gag character. Artemi's very passionate about chivalry and duty... and is thus the source of countless gags where her sheltered worldview clashes with everyone she meets and everything she witnesses. Especially the adults only library section. And as much as Cole pushes Artemi out of her comfort zone, she was very quick to start pushing back in funny ways once she got to know him better. Through Cole and Sidd and their families, Artemi gained a very strong and supportive network to lean on, and I wish her the best with her personal journey.
WE ARE STARVING PLEASE GIVE US SOMETHING
TB is currently being worked on! There's been a few small QOL updates on the Patreon that include a UI overhaul, gallery menu, and some other small tidbits. They will be available to the public in about a month or so!
THANK YOU. THANK YOUUUU! (I honestly even forgot the plot of the entire game, I just know Sidd is really cute and he should get a boyfriend)
best vn ever just like repeat frfr
Im just thinking. What if the house of shannesy or whatever guy gets an inn. But its the bone breaker tavern. And im just thinking about what if this happened. anyways good story staple of approval
hes gonna start working in TB this year after hes done fixing some spelling mistakes in Repeat
No rush tho, take your time shiro XD.
I need new updates for this so bad but I also need the lore of Phillip in Repeat AAAAAAAAAAAAA
Seriously though the only part I dislike in this so far is the bat lady's plot twist, everything else is amazing.
everything I agree with
This made me laugh, this made me cry, among other things.
Everything about this makes me very happy.
The character design.
The use of SRD content to your advantage to get a magic system most people would know, to add to a world where it WOULD make sense.
Bending some things to make them cooler/make more sense in a story.
Showing everyone's classes and stats, and fleshing out why they have them in a way that makes sense both in and out of story.
The use of music and expressions.
One very specific character being comedic gold in a way that adds, so much to them.
Mentioning that magic has traits of ones personality involved, both directly and indirectly, and showing that personality, many, MANY times.
Leaving us on a moment where we have so many questions, while answering so many more.
This is worth the wait, and I wish you luck on all your future endeavors.
Best VN I've read omg. Hope this goes off hiatus soon!
Same!!!