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Omg honestly this is a great novel i really love it and can't wait for future updates

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I am now invested in this simply for Ilia because omfg she's hilarious, I love this level of protective mother too much here lol I definitely would be terrified of her bad side thou-

typo!
"she *as* unsure what compelled her" should be *was*, agatha talking to envy after the gang visits cassie.

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GRANK PAY GORN?!?!? 😛😛

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please contribute to the fanwiki

https://temptationsballad.fandom.com/wiki/Temptation%27s_Ballad_Wiki

For Granks page

“Grank does his best to watch over Artemi, providing her solace and reprieve from Her Excellency's sharp tongue whenever possible. It is heavily implied that he harbors romantic feelings for her”

I havnt read this in a while but is this true???

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God no!!!!

Just some  a-hole inserting his pseudo-incest headcannon on the wiki as if it was a fact

Nah it's crazy how Cole has amazing chemistry with almost anyone but Grank>>>>>>

Updated right before I have to go on a long train ride. Thanks for the update, hope my phone battery lasts the whole way now lmao

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My fellow TB fans. Once again our boi Shirokoi has delivered and we can once again delve into furry gay chaos with some adventure and action. LETS GOOOOOOO!!!!!

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Did you twinkify the bear knight?

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You mean the screenshot on the itch.io page? No, that's an old screenshot that shows Grank's original sprites before they were reworked. He's much buffer now lol

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oh lol I thought that was the April fool's

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Oof I wish I had time for an April Fools joke. I've been crunching on this update for weeks qwq

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First time playing, gotta say I’m loving the flawed but relatable and fun characters here. Also, as a hot dad connoisseur, Grank and Marrow are so ridiculously hot. Thank you for the food~

Replaying the game after a long while, found that the character sprites keep overlapping often, not sure if this is a bug but I doubt it's intended! Love the game by the way, an utter gem!

Thanks for the report! It's an issue that happens when skipping through dialogue quickly that cancels out animations mid-transition. I haven't quite found a solution for it yet qwq


Could you let me know where in the story this happened? A screenshot with dialogue will be enough. Also let me know if you used the skip/ CLTR button at any point! I'll try and figure out a work-around in the meantime ;w;/

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Sorry for late response!
It happens throughout a lot of sections of chapter 1, but I think it started when they arrive in Rotten Redd's Alley. So far nothing of the sort encountered in chapter 2.
I can't exactly remember if I skipped at any point, especially since I was doing a full reread of the game. However, knowing I have a habit of skipping with other Ren'py VNs (that I'm less invested in), I wouldn't be too surprised if I used it a couple times.
Hope that helps!

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You know, from all the furry VNs i played so far,  this vn is the one that i enjoyed reading the most! The characters, the humour, the story. I LOVE IT! One of my favourite characters gotta be sidd's mom.  Might try  reading the other vn you made. Excited to know more of the story! 

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i have played repeat and omg it was actually so good, like the story of mental health struggles in it is amazing

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also shirkoi if you do read this, just wanted to say this visual novel is my personal favorite out of all the ones that are popularly known: Echo, FbtW, Adastra, etc. Maybe its because of Vivian Jade or the way comedy clashes well with the gay writing lmao. Keep up the good work and i wait for the next great update. Sincerely, Jack Suzuki (not my irl name, just a fursona)

**Minor Spoiler**













PS: Totally calling it rn but Artemi x Maeve. Idk their energy just kicks well and it would be a good arch for Artemi: Church life to real life lmao.  Also Sidd is the favorite character for me. Nerdy but buff and pretty much the greatest fighter in Axia? He is best boy. Sheriff Wes is a good second (he needs some lovin lmao).

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I neeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeed a sex scene about sidd x calder and a lot of sex a lovey dovey scenes of sidd x cole

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honestly i see a romance or bromance together. despite their differences, i see sidd x calder more than sidd x cole. coles has to find his own path of truth fr

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from the little i played i can already tell the story is going to be great

Is there a reason why Artemi has more defined lineart than Sidd, Cole etc? For the record I think both the rough and clean look pretty

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I'm currently in the process of refining all character sprites in the game. So far in the public build, Artemi, Wes and Grank have been hit with the HD ray. Expect more character art to get refined as updates roll out!

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I can smell Sidd x Calder happening

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Honestly same. I was just thinking about it, lol. Despite their different backgrounds, Sidd x Calder can totally happen. (:

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Sidd's just slowly pulling everybody by being a sweet and good boy uwu

its the himbos harem. bad curse for straight guys but for sidd? its exactly what this buff nerd needs. MEN! or someone in his life fr

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Cassius: [Time Stop]

Me: What am I thinking of???




IZANAGI. HE DEF JUST USED IZANAGI WHAAAT

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OMG CASSIUS IS AN UMBRA WITCH

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i literally need to see sidd and cole become a thing in future chapters, its killing me not knowing whats coming and how long its gunna take 😭

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I was vouching for Cole and Clyde

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