it's hard to pick favorites of vns, however this is def one of my top 3. i cant count the number to how many times ive audibly cackled at character dialogue and im super loving all the dynamics, especially the marrow/cole father/son dynamic since such a positive masculine figure (and queer masculine at that) as marrow is a rare, rare occurrence to see portrayed in our time, all things considered. keep expressing the story you want to express, lovelies!
Aside from repeat, this is my favourite VN ever, full stop. Infact, if this had as much content and choices as Repeat, I'd say this is better. (Don't get me wrong i adore sissle & owen and I cant wait to see more of phillip too, but I haven't been able to play D&D with my crew in over a year and this really fills that adventurous hole in my heart... oh and the nsfw scene is really hot too)
lmao!! the bitch slapping ghost is my favourite part of this recently , as i only played this around half - nearly a year ago. this is a really good VN and i love it! also sidd is my favourite, cause seriously, i relate to him on a spiritual level. xd
He may be updating repeat next not this a post on his twitter said he wanted to spend 6 months a year on this and the other half on repeat. I am fine with either cuz both are amazing and I loooove both sissel and cole!
Maybe, but persosally Sidd strikes me as too Nice ?Selfless?Like he very much cares about doing the right thing to be TN, but maybe that's just my impression
edit: after replaying I leaning more to NG for Sidd
i guess that's as good oportunity to elaborate in my interpretation of the main characters alignment
Artemi-first she is a paladin which are obrigatory LG, even if she wasn't a paladin she's still a Good person who cares about protecting the inocent and helping those in need, she also cares greatly about honor,laws and authorithy which is very lawful
Coli-while he is not a bad guy he also doesn't go out of his way to anyone else either(exept his father) so neutral in the good-evil scale, he also constantly lies,cheats and steals to get what he wants and has no respect for the law or any external rule system, as wel as no code of honor, so i say Chaotic
Sidd-he is not evil by any means and his motivation of wanting to give a easier life for his parents, as well as just being a nice person in general makes me read him as Good, as for his lawful-chaotic aligment, he has no internal code of condute/honor that we know of, he has no problems following coli's order even when it involves breaking the law, and he seems to admire both the lawful church knights(i assuming by his reaction to meeting Artemi) and the chaotic bonebreaker guild so i would say he's Neutral in the lawful-chaotic sense
That Marrow beatdown was something I needed personally. I sincerely appreciate the words pummelled over me. It will help me a lot. Cheers to this fun story!
(Note: %s must be caught in a string. I'm sure others have pointed out that text error)
honestly some times ago when there was just the first day I was like "yeah this vn is ok nothing exceptional but ok" though the start is a lil slow but when it comes to the fighting ring part and forward character starts to be really seen in every aspect and I was like screaming and gasping or laughing for all the time this is a wonderful work at the moment I'm writing this is my favorite vn
im not sure but maybe the fact is that he act a bit like an authoritary mom so I can understand why he is not really fine with him... or maybe there is more to be told?
Why i have the sense that the Polar bear will be an Antagonist And/or that Marrow will die sometime? I think that that could be a 'boom' to Artemi and Cole Development
honestly i think you are wrong i found her really nice and I don't think people dislike her at all
anyway the trio is perfect because they are a trio it's all so good because anyone does "his part" i think it's kinda stupid to underrate anyone of the protagonist it would means the other too are bad or this is what I think at least
I know romance isn't the main focus of the game, but I was still wondering if there will be multiple romantic endings for Cole? (please..) - a colexclyde shipper
I agree and hope there is too and I def ship cole and clyde as the pairing tho I'd be happy with more story too. Shirokoi is def an amazing artist but his writing is what keeps me hooked its kinda a shame he's not just an author on fictionpress or anything he's super talented.
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only linux?
We Waitin for the other download for other devices =D
No windows?
I'm assuming that the non-linux versions will come out in a bit, so I'll be patient
Anyone know when the update's coming out? I'm so excited
it's hard to pick favorites of vns, however this is def one of my top 3. i cant count the number to how many times ive audibly cackled at character dialogue and im super loving all the dynamics, especially the marrow/cole father/son dynamic since such a positive masculine figure (and queer masculine at that) as marrow is a rare, rare occurrence to see portrayed in our time, all things considered. keep expressing the story you want to express, lovelies!
Aside from repeat, this is my favourite VN ever, full stop. Infact, if this had as much content and choices as Repeat, I'd say this is better. (Don't get me wrong i adore sissle & owen and I cant wait to see more of phillip too, but I haven't been able to play D&D with my crew in over a year and this really fills that adventurous hole in my heart... oh and the nsfw scene is really hot too)
Man the wait for a new update is killing me the writing is sooo good and i love flawed characters done right.
soo when will the update be out around?
I came for the gay, stayed for the adorable paladin. Great fun!
lmao!! the bitch slapping ghost is my favourite part of this recently , as i only played this around half - nearly a year ago. this is a really good VN and i love it! also sidd is my favourite, cause seriously, i relate to him on a spiritual level. xd
great visual novel, hoping to see more
the updates seem to come each 50 days+/- so it should be coming anyday now,
although this is just a pattern i notice i have no official confirmation
He may be updating repeat next not this a post on his twitter said he wanted to spend 6 months a year on this and the other half on repeat. I am fine with either cuz both are amazing and I loooove both sissel and cole!
In patrion the version 0.1.7 is out and it has been over a month.
He does work on repeat but the release for this VN must be close by
Whenever Sidd does this I literally get so hyped. It's my favorite thing. I can't help but air punch every time he does it lol
Btw, what's the Bonebreaker Guild theme called? I wanna share it around because it sounds really really cool
I found it! :) In case anyone else is interested, the song is Pirate Dance by David Fesliyan.
ah mate, thanks for this
What is Sidd's alignment? Artemi and Cole serem to be LG and CN respectivaly, while Sidd i'm divided between NG and CG leaning more to the latter
Sorry for my spelling, English is my second language
Edit: Now that chapter two is over i would like to give my take on other characters
Marrow:CG
Ilia:CG
Katrina:LE
Clyde:TN
Edit:sorry I've been editing this a lot as i change my mind i decided to leave only the ones i am condidantly sure
Sidd might be TN for now idk
Maybe, but persosally Sidd strikes me as too Nice ?Selfless?Like he very much cares about doing the right thing to be TN, but maybe that's just my impression
edit: after replaying I leaning more to NG for Sidd
I don't playDnD can you translate the alignments.
TN = True Neutral or just base line neutral
NG = Neutral Good
G-Good
E-Evil
L-Lawful
C-Chaotic
N-Neutral(can mean neutral in the good-evil scale or in the lawful-chaotic scale, with TN-True Neutral being both)
there's alot of discussion on what qualifies someone to certain alignment but if you want to know more
https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/CharacterAlignment
i guess that's as good oportunity to elaborate in my interpretation of the main characters alignment
Artemi-first she is a paladin which are obrigatory LG, even if she wasn't a paladin she's still a Good person who cares about protecting the inocent and helping those in need, she also cares greatly about honor,laws and authorithy which is very lawful
Coli-while he is not a bad guy he also doesn't go out of his way to anyone else either(exept his father) so neutral in the good-evil scale, he also constantly lies,cheats and steals to get what he wants and has no respect for the law or any external rule system, as wel as no code of honor, so i say Chaotic
Sidd-he is not evil by any means and his motivation of wanting to give a easier life for his parents, as well as just being a nice person in general makes me read him as Good, as for his lawful-chaotic aligment, he has no internal code of condute/honor that we know of, he has no problems following coli's order even when it involves breaking the law, and he seems to admire both the lawful church knights(i assuming by his reaction to meeting Artemi) and the chaotic bonebreaker guild so i would say he's Neutral in the lawful-chaotic sense
but that's just my interpretation anyway.
I love this so much, coles my favorite so far and I really can't wait until you get back to this and repeat I enjoyed both of them
I like Marrow.Sidd,Cole.Hope there a new furry animal soon.
lol, I was surprised to hear an instrumental version of the Meteor Garden theme to play at the end of chapter 1. Excellent choice.
Hope there will be another exciting update for this game
That Marrow beatdown was something I needed personally. I sincerely appreciate the words pummelled over me. It will help me a lot. Cheers to this fun story!
(Note: %s must be caught in a string. I'm sure others have pointed out that text error)
Does anyone know when there is gonna be a new update?
Shiro just recently switched his focus back to Repeat his other Visual Novel for about 6 months.
Wait really??? Omg I've been waiting for so long;-;
Yeah his schedule for his Builds are Repeat for half a year then Temptations ballad for the other half
Ohh, didn't know! Thank you!
I was unable to update my game with the Dropbox APK file (android) from patreon. It just won't open after I've downloaded it. Anyone else?
It's not an issue with trusting unknown Sources I've already turned that off.
I can translate your game into Spanish, if you wish.
Found a bug! Chapter 2, Sidd talking to his mom.
Uhhhh is this a bug or is he cryptically triggered-
Lol I saw that too.
Sidd is secretly a robot. Explains how his parents are birds. They must have built him.. out of cheese.
Hahahah indeed
honestly some times ago when there was just the first day I was like "yeah this vn is ok nothing exceptional but ok" though the start is a lil slow but when it comes to the fighting ring part and forward character starts to be really seen in every aspect and I was like screaming and gasping or laughing for all the time this is a wonderful work at the moment I'm writing this is my favorite vn
Did I miss some dialogue? Why is Cole always at Hamish's throat? Great work guys gj!
im not sure but maybe the fact is that he act a bit like an authoritary mom so I can understand why he is not really fine with him... or maybe there is more to be told?
I'm looking forward to seeing how their relationship turns out
birb mom is best mom.
and Yeen dads are good dads.
nuff said.
^this, all of this
Wait wait wait sooo we have to wait two months for an update thats just rude and playing with my emotions😶😱😱😱😭
Jeez, have some patience.
i agree and at the same time agree with the other one too omg it's all too great
Bro I wanna see more Cole a Clyde like wut haopend between them, but I slowly want to know when the next update is
Awww, I love Hamish so much! I hope Cole gives him a break.
omfg i am losing my shit with sidd and his mom talk XD
Thank you so much shiro <3
I don't think this is supposed to happen.
Yes. I have the same thing.
sidd's gay panic is so great it broke the fourth wall
Homeboy's gay freakout is so powerful that it broke the VN's coding
as i said in another comment i honestly find it pretty fitting even if it's a mistake I would prefer it this way
Oh I was late with the screenshot lol.
Honestly even though it wasn't supposed to happen it still worked.
That's usually how I react lol
wait is prince cassius the same cassius as in adastra
Why i have the sense that the Polar bear will be an Antagonist And/or that Marrow will die sometime? I think that that could be a 'boom' to Artemi and Cole Development
nOnnononono if shiro fucking hurts marrow im gonna cry so hard
this is a threat
>w> ño
i'll join in with this threat
oof pls noooooooooooooooodon't do thaaaaaaat it will be a boom to my development too XD
Ok is it just me or does anyone else think Artemi is the most underrated character of the story so far. She do be an absolute beast
We don't underrate her she's the best
honestly i think you are wrong i found her really nice and I don't think people dislike her at all
anyway the trio is perfect because they are a trio it's all so good because anyone does "his part" i think it's kinda stupid to underrate anyone of the protagonist it would means the other too are bad or this is what I think at least
any news?
If I become a Patreon, will I get the updates to this game earlier?
Yes
I know romance isn't the main focus of the game, but I was still wondering if there will be multiple romantic endings for Cole? (please..)
- a colexclyde shipper
I agree and hope there is too and I def ship cole and clyde as the pairing tho I'd be happy with more story too. Shirokoi is def an amazing artist but his writing is what keeps me hooked its kinda a shame he's not just an author on fictionpress or anything he's super talented.
i don't see lot's of choices maybe it's a linear story (an amazing one)