Temptation's Ballad

For Sidd: F

For Artemi: NO!

For cole: yes, bat woman sus

omg i can't even with this new update, the way sidd just plucked Artemi out of the crowd was everything 

fujoshi artemi HAHA

is there gallery or something?

This VN was quite fun! I really enjoyed reading it. All the characters have a relatable personality and circumstance, and I can't help but feel as if this tale could be true (even though everyone tends to be gay in it, not that im complaining hehe).

Im so jelly. Wish I had a father like Marrow. He's so supportive.

Truly a beautiful piece, constantly makes me feel warm and fuzzy. The story is very well written, with immersing plot, good character development, and great comedy. Characters have good designs, the artworks and sprites are nicely drawn. Sometimes I even feel you're being very generous with how many variants there are. I can't tell if the music are originally composed, but they work well too. With an UI that isn't the default design and perhaps even a gallery section, this will be a 11/10 visual novel.

Now with the professional review done...

Omg why is every single guys in this game so hot and charming. I love them all so much pls give me moreeeee

This is such a well written VN, and I really enjoy it, but when is the next update?

Please, in the future you can add the button to hide the text (on android)?

can't wait for the next update ^^

Everything about this visual novel has my heart in a flutter. I greatly support this with all my heart and if I was able to use patron and my money you could have it all. This is honesty with a cherry on top yessiree!

HOLY CRAP. I must say, this update was HUGE. This novel has taken my heart and it's hilarious. Keep up the good work, and I'm sorry that I can't support on patron or anything. I'm kinda broke ATM.

Love the VN so far, great story and characters. Can't wait for the next update, but with that said will we ever see what's under the knight commander armor ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) ? (what he said to Cole and what noodle saw made me really intrigued)

Sooooo good! Literally one of the best VNs ive played, and I can wait for the future updates! : )

There's never a dull moment with Noodle lmao

Almost woke up my family at 3 am when I first encountered him 

Even though it's short, it's straightforward and well-made. Looking forward for the rest of the VN ^w^

This is probably my most favorite VN ive played! The writing and the characters are so charming! I also appreciate the NSFW warning/sign before it happens! (although i didnt skip it ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) ) Im very excited for more!!

I've never cried at writing in a game before, let alone from a "pulpy" genre like furry VN.  Your writing is incredibly insightful and it deserves special recognition.

Amazing character development for Artemi in the latest update! I also love Cole's interactions with the snakes snake. :3

This update cemented Temptation's Ballad as one of my favorite VNs, if not my favorite ongoing one. The character depth and relationship dynamics are just great, every development is a joy to read through. The library scene in particular was a high point to me, that was really heartwarming and very much grounded in reality (magic aside lol), it made me feel even more invested in the characters than I already was. The writing makes it very easy to empathize with the characters, their struggles and their achievements, and I don't think I can praise that enough.

I want every character shown in the latest update to be happy too :c

well, maybe not Malus.

or, actually, maybe Malus too so we can see a better side of him(?)but he's a very fun chsracter as is

Holy freaking cow. This novel is amazing!! I was so sad when I finished chapter two and had to wait for updates, BUT IT'LL BE WORTH THE WAIT. I'm so excited for the third chapter!

I can't believe Sidd was hiding that this whole time!

Just tell him Cole..... Just tell your father about it !!! About your magic !!......

Lots of different emotions in this update for a lot of characters (same level as Cole's physical condition). 

Damn the last scene just ended me. Cole and Marrow are so.......... i don't have the words but my heart felt the intensity of their father/son moment.

Also is there a soundtrack for this game? Holy hell the music is great

Y'know....the closet scene was great and all, but as I was reading Sidd's lines, I realized that Sidd and I are the exact same when it comes to all that stuff. Made me think I was reading my own brain :(

I'm officially in love with Grank. Omg~ Be still my heart. Please tell me there's going to be much much more of him.

emotionally vulnerable men?? in my gay furry vn??? more likely than youd think—click here for a free 'hits you in the feels' check now

Argh again, my heart..cant take ...all the feels....
Gonna admit that bonebreaker library scene....it was almost to much.
Maybe because i  had a learning disability too  when i was young so this scene was very powerful for me. Well done.
i kind of hope that this scene will have some meaning  for the future.

Finally more of this amazing work.