After catching up with the story, I can now officially state a few things :
- Marrow is definitively the DILF of the year
- Artemi is one hell of a cinnamon roll, and she's super funny to tease
- Ilia is best mom
- Hamish best dad
- Grank is precious and also a DILF
- Noodle is the cutest nope rope I've ever seen, I wanna pet him
I definitively grew fond of the characters in this story, they're really well-written and lovable (except that old witch of a bishop, she's almost on par with the two elder cunts from Far Beyond the World)
My favourite's still Marrow however, definitively a great character in every manner (and I can't say I don't have a thing for mercenaries since Iron Bull is one of my fav characters)
I just saw the retweet on Shirokoi's Twitter of Malus concept art and I find it so funny he's just a noodle now, I'm sure he'll get his glow up someday but I still want him to stay a cute little noodle
So... I just finished the scene where we first meet Agatha and... um...
Spoilers and Wild Mass Guessing below:
Is... is Cole actually Marrow AND Hamish's biological kid and not just Marrow's? Because ngl, I was kind of enjoying the whole "you're not my real dad" dynamic Cole had going with Hamish and making him Hamish's biological kid kind of ruins that. It's a fairly cheap way to resolve the conflict in Hamish and Cole's whole sort of "son not liking his step-dad" relationship and opens up a number of rather uncomfortable questions. Like, why wouldn't Marrow and Hamish just TELL Cole this when he was younger? Cole makes no secret of the fact that he thinks of Hamish as "Dad's killjoy boyfriend" instead of "Dad #2" and it makes Marrow out to be a really shitty partner if he didn't step in and clear this matter up for all these years. I just can't see Marrow doing that considering what I've seen of him.
Basically, I hope I'm wrong and just overthinking things. There's clearly something magical about Cole's origins based on what Agnes said, but what is still unknown and I really hope it isn't what I think it is.
Okay so I just got past this scene and I have an actual theory :
Marrow and Hamish are indeed Cole's biological dads
It wouldn't surprise me if Marrow really desired a son with Hamish, but since they're both males, he had to find another, unorthodox, method. He might have learned of the existence of a certain magic/spell that permits that and stole it from Agatha's lab
Thus, Cole was born. But maybe the disease he got during his childhood and leaving him weakened for the rest of his life was a result of his rather particular birth conditions.
Marrow might feel especially guilty, thinking it was because of him that his son ended up weak and not strong like him.
That would also be a reason why he despises magic so much (this and maybe something that happened with his sister)
I really love this game so far, both the story telling and character building are great af, had me in tears a couple times actually haha. It has been a pleasant journey so far cuz i don't see myself rushing the story to any NSFW scences like other games lol. I'm looking forward to your work in the future!
...Holy crap. A gay nsfw Furry VN that happens to have a female protagonist! (Or, one of the protagonists at any rate.) I never thought I'd see the day!
Aaaw thank you! Writing for Artemi is pretty fun since I don't have to worry about any romantic direction when she's with Cole or Sidd. Gives her character a lot more room to breathe :3
Does anyone know where the music comes from? Because both this VN and Repeat have AMAZING soundtracks and I would love to follow the artist(s) who makes the songs.
this game is so much fun and when it comes to character development or story-writing, the author made a stunning work. The art and the music made such an enjoyable ambiance. i had a few giggles and of course i shed a few tears. I really love what came out from this game, i just can't wait for the release of the whole game.
hoiw do we go about launching the game? im using winzip and it tells me it can't execute the launch command saying something about it missing. any suggestions?
Damn, another fun game to enjoy while I wait for Owen's story to be updated. Oh, and I'll never forgive you if you work yourself to death trying to meet the update demands or your more impatient fans.
I don't know who's being updated. I just mentioned Owen's name because I'm mostly invested in his story. Sissel is the second one I want to see finished and finally Phillip.
Sissel's route is almost done, Owen's route is about a third done, I think? Aaaand Phillip's... route does not have a day 10 yet due to reasons I might know.
Damnnnn, even if there are no choices (not that I know of since i just finished chapter 1) the story and the game is so damn good, the characters are amazingly written too
The spells and their effects are very well made too and the music is so good
Every time someone asks me where the update is while I'm actively crunching to finish the update drains another year off my already short life ;;;w;;;;;
I can't seem to get to the final battle between evreyone and the cloaked figure. Is this part of Temptations Ballad an update bc I downloaded this on my pc and there are final battle scene images.
Those are for update 0.2.1 which is not available for the public yet. Please don't sift through the game files if you don't want to spoil the game for yourself.
This in one of my favs, it got a lot of things right. However, I noticed that the game tries way too hard to be wholesome in almost every scenario that it just comes across as unrealistic, nobody is going to be giving life advice and be super duper supportive to someone they've just met 5 minutes ago, everyone is extremely positive almost all the time it actually gets tiring to read.
Speak for yourself. i find it Fine as it is. The main purpose of such a story is to entertain the Reader so they get enjoyment out of the experience. And i dare say that the Wholesomenis IS what draws most readers into this world.
And since most of the advices come from parents that give them to friends of ther sons, i find that part fitting as well.
Nah he's got a point. The wholesome speeches were kinda my way to establish the parental figures as supportive pillars to the main characters, but lately I kinda inadvertently spread it to a lot of the other characters as well. I'll keep an eye on this in future updates ;w;/
Sorry! My work schedule has been a bit of a chaotic mess lately. I only have a few more sprite and a bit of coding to finish. I'm aiming for a release by the end of this week! ;w;/
Okay, I really don't like VN's, but this, this has no doubt become one of, if not the favorite things I've ever seen. It's spectacular. I really wish I could support but College is expensive ;-;
OMG! I played the whole demo! It took me a while to read it but I finished it! It was very good!!! AND YOU LEFT ME IN A CLIFFHANGER!!!
That out of the way... I like how the characters are well developed and very diverse in personality. I like how you try other different species for your story like badgers, orcas, crocodiles, peacocks and other birds than the usuals. I look forward to your story in the future and same for Repeat.
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After catching up with the story, I can now officially state a few things :
- Marrow is definitively the DILF of the year
- Artemi is one hell of a cinnamon roll, and she's super funny to tease
- Ilia is best mom
- Hamish best dad
- Grank is precious and also a DILF
- Noodle is the cutest nope rope I've ever seen, I wanna pet him
I definitively grew fond of the characters in this story, they're really well-written and lovable (except that old witch of a bishop, she's almost on par with the two elder cunts from Far Beyond the World)
My favourite's still Marrow however, definitively a great character in every manner (and I can't say I don't have a thing for mercenaries since Iron Bull is one of my fav characters)
Oh yeahh..
Seriously, fk Aldris - _-
Dran isn't as bad as that tubby bitsh but still-- AAA
Me, starting to play this game : Oh, this Marrow fella looks super handsome, maybe he'll be a potential love inter-
oh wait that's the MC's dad
welp, it's fanfiction time I guess
I kept seeing so many battle CGs of this VN that I decided it's probably worth playing, diving in.
Edit: I can't stop reading lol
What was the name of the bg music when...
ah--
When Calder was beaten shtless by Cole?
(Need it for a project please q wq)
Yess, where can we find the background music for this!
I saw the interaction between cole and his “ex”. And I hope to god they can get back together.😭🥺
I just saw the retweet on Shirokoi's Twitter of Malus concept art and I find it so funny he's just a noodle now, I'm sure he'll get his glow up someday but I still want him to stay a cute little noodle
I like my demons pocket-sized :3
Heya, sorry for the re-ask question, but is there a discord server for this? If so, what is the invite?
The discord server is Patreon supportors only qwq/
Okay!
So... I just finished the scene where we first meet Agatha and... um...
Spoilers and Wild Mass Guessing below:
Is... is Cole actually Marrow AND Hamish's biological kid and not just Marrow's? Because ngl, I was kind of enjoying the whole "you're not my real dad" dynamic Cole had going with Hamish and making him Hamish's biological kid kind of ruins that. It's a fairly cheap way to resolve the conflict in Hamish and Cole's whole sort of "son not liking his step-dad" relationship and opens up a number of rather uncomfortable questions. Like, why wouldn't Marrow and Hamish just TELL Cole this when he was younger? Cole makes no secret of the fact that he thinks of Hamish as "Dad's killjoy boyfriend" instead of "Dad #2" and it makes Marrow out to be a really shitty partner if he didn't step in and clear this matter up for all these years. I just can't see Marrow doing that considering what I've seen of him.
Basically, I hope I'm wrong and just overthinking things. There's clearly something magical about Cole's origins based on what Agnes said, but what is still unknown and I really hope it isn't what I think it is.
Okay so I just got past this scene and I have an actual theory :
Marrow and Hamish are indeed Cole's biological dads
It wouldn't surprise me if Marrow really desired a son with Hamish, but since they're both males, he had to find another, unorthodox, method. He might have learned of the existence of a certain magic/spell that permits that and stole it from Agatha's lab
Thus, Cole was born. But maybe the disease he got during his childhood and leaving him weakened for the rest of his life was a result of his rather particular birth conditions.
Marrow might feel especially guilty, thinking it was because of him that his son ended up weak and not strong like him.
That would also be a reason why he despises magic so much (this and maybe something that happened with his sister)
I really love this game so far, both the story telling and character building are great af, had me in tears a couple times actually haha. It has been a pleasant journey so far cuz i don't see myself rushing the story to any NSFW scences like other games lol. I'm looking forward to your work in the future!
I got to the scene where the trio have lunch with Sidd's mom and I want Ilia to adopt Artemi and pull out that broken bottle on Katrina.
Ilia giving Katrina the Calder treatment? Hell yes!!
Hey Creator are you add some NSFW stuff in next update?
horny *bonk*
...Holy crap. A gay nsfw Furry VN that happens to have a female protagonist! (Or, one of the protagonists at any rate.) I never thought I'd see the day!
Aaaw thank you! Writing for Artemi is pretty fun since I don't have to worry about any romantic direction when she's with Cole or Sidd. Gives her character a lot more room to breathe :3
Don't forget that she's not in skimpy clothes, like other female protagonists usually are.... 😐😐😑😑
But they're men in skimpy clothing. You don't see that ANYWHERE. 😘😘😘
My new favorite VN ever! Why did I wait so long to play? Agh! Is there a discord server for this? I NEED ONE AAAAAAAAAAAAA
its for the patrons
:)
Ty!
Does anyone know where the music comes from? Because both this VN and Repeat have AMAZING soundtracks and I would love to follow the artist(s) who makes the songs.
Oh hell yes an update
So Good!
oh my fucking god i forgot to follow and almost missed this update, thank you nervous checking habit
Ooh noice, an updoot
- A smol updoot but has a lot of content which is enough to satisfy until the next one. This one never failed to be one of my favorites ^ w^
that was an amazing update. already excited for the next, and ready to wait however long it may take
Do we get to see Sidd and Cole have sex yet?
That was already in it. You can get it when Cole is showing them around the Guild house (I think that's what it's called).
Specifically, the supply closet
Spoilers:
All I could say during the fight is: GO HAMISH GO!!!!!!!!!
Eyyyy tysm shiro, I've been waiting for this update
where should i begin.
this game is so much fun and when it comes to character development or story-writing, the author made a stunning work. The art and the music made such an enjoyable ambiance. i had a few giggles and of course i shed a few tears. I really love what came out from this game, i just can't wait for the release of the whole game.
hoiw do we go about launching the game? im using winzip and it tells me it can't execute the launch command saying something about it missing. any suggestions?
if you havent fixed it yet, try right clicking and run as admin, or run in japanese
Damn, another fun game to enjoy while I wait for Owen's story to be updated. Oh, and I'll never forgive you if you work yourself to death trying to meet the update demands or your more impatient fans.
The next update will be Owen's?
Heard there was a Samuel scene as well but dunno where.. yet.
I don't know who's being updated. I just mentioned Owen's name because I'm mostly invested in his story. Sissel is the second one I want to see finished and finally Phillip.
Sissel's route is almost done, Owen's route is about a third done, I think? Aaaand Phillip's... route does not have a day 10 yet
due to reasons I might know.Damnnnn, even if there are no choices (not that I know of since i just finished chapter 1) the story and the game is so damn good, the characters are amazingly written too
The spells and their effects are very well made too and the music is so good
Im just here to say
Your fursona is kinda hot ngl
Take your time, we can wait, don't overwork yourself.
I'm still waiting QwQ
Every time someone asks me where the update is while I'm actively crunching to finish the update drains another year off my already short life ;;;w;;;;;
*Headpats* shhh shhhh It's ok 0w0
I can't blame them this is some good stuff. But that doesn't mean we can keep bothering you, we just need to be patient.😃😃😃
Shhhhhhh take a rest if needed we'll wait even if it takes a month or two
You really are Phillip..
Not really good with this emotional support stuff (or whatever) but *thumbs up* good luck..?
...
I'M TRYING OK???
So he said by the end of last week im not trying to rush him im just curious for the development and how much more we will wait for more
First VN I've enjoyed so far I can't wait for the update, When is the update btw o3o
probably around the 30th
edit: nvm, the creator said it would hopefully be near the end of the week
I'll wait OwO, Thanks btw
I can't seem to get to the final battle between evreyone and the cloaked figure. Is this part of Temptations Ballad an update bc I downloaded this on my pc and there are final battle scene images.
Those are for update 0.2.1 which is not available for the public yet. Please don't sift through the game files if you don't want to spoil the game for yourself.
Thnks for letting me know. Your games are amazing!!
Thnks for letting me know. Your games are amazing!!
Well now you know where they are :v
I hope you're having a good NaNoWriMo Shirokoi!!! 😎😎😎😃😃😃
This in one of my favs, it got a lot of things right. However, I noticed that the game tries way too hard to be wholesome in almost every scenario that it just comes across as unrealistic, nobody is going to be giving life advice and be super duper supportive to someone they've just met 5 minutes ago, everyone is extremely positive almost all the time it actually gets tiring to read.
Speak for yourself. i find it Fine as it is.
The main purpose of such a story is to entertain the Reader so they get enjoyment out of the experience. And i dare say that the Wholesomenis IS what draws most readers into this world.
And since most of the advices come from parents that give them to friends of ther sons, i find that part fitting as well.
Nah he's got a point. The wholesome speeches were kinda my way to establish the parental figures as supportive pillars to the main characters, but lately I kinda inadvertently spread it to a lot of the other characters as well. I'll keep an eye on this in future updates ;w;/
Alright then. keep up the good work then.
Just for the Records, i loved all the characters so far :)
after reading a different VN that really twists the knife in I could use some more of your character's wholesome speeches though! X3
Great work thank you for sharing!
When is the update for public coming out?
if it is like most times, i would guess in about 2 weeks, give or take a few days.
Sorry! My work schedule has been a bit of a chaotic mess lately. I only have a few more sprite and a bit of coding to finish. I'm aiming for a release by the end of this week! ;w;/
Am i the only one who ship Cole & Sidd together thinking Artemi will end up lesbian in spite of Sidd and Clyde training ? T.T
Edit: After all of this, yes i think so x')
I'm shipping Cole and Clyde.
Yeah me too~ 😎😎😎
Maybe the love triangle of which artemi spoke was Sidd, Cole, and Clyde
Sidd already has a harem. Let poor Cole reconciliate with Clyde.
Okay, I really don't like VN's, but this, this has no doubt become one of, if not the favorite things I've ever seen. It's spectacular. I really wish I could support but College is expensive ;-;
Aay no worries, it's heartwarming to hear that you enjoy my work! Thank you for the kind words <3
OMG! I played the whole demo! It took me a while to read it but I finished it! It was very good!!! AND YOU LEFT ME IN A CLIFFHANGER!!!
That out of the way... I like how the characters are well developed and very diverse in personality. I like how you try other different species for your story like badgers, orcas, crocodiles, peacocks and other birds than the usuals. I look forward to your story in the future and same for Repeat.