this one will be much longer, the devs are spending this year on their other project, Repeat, then they'll be swapping back and forth (from what I can tell
A bit gay but still great XD. I do like how you draw the characters, the personality also fits properly (man, I could say it has the vibe of an anime series)
I'm not seeing any other moves yet like story track shifts aside from narration but it's still quite nice to see how you make each chapter neat.
A bit surprised by how artemi changed within three days, maybe the change was too fast? Her usual meekness is totally gone when the third day struck
Nonetheless, I know you have reasons to why there's a personality spurt
Extreme circumstances often have extreme results. Artemi was incredibly sheltered , full of self-doubts because being the creator was the only thing she really had going for her. Suddenly meeting two people who don't shower her with praise just for being the creator's chosen, and them appreciating Artemi for who she is would change her quite quickly. They found her lightning magic pretty awesome, whereas before, her lightning magic was a source of doubt for her (since the other chosen ones weren't tempest mages).
The story is great so far. Little nitpick for Malus (on Android at least, I don't know for other releases), his sprite is too low and his face keeps getting hidden behind the text box.
Keep up the good work! I really like your characters, none of them feels "one dimensional" to me, or those that did were shown to have deeper personalities in a twist of events.
After playing, i really loved how this game has gone far, the storyline is great and heartwarming (though the concept is used very fondly throughout the chapters) overall it's very great and i can't wait to reach the plot of the story!!! There's a few downside regarding with the sound effects (particularly the volume and tone of the effects) it would really be great to change them with more not-so-dramatic ones or just simply change their volume so people like me won't get jumpscared in the middle of the scenes.
Best of luck for the development of the VN, it has really struck my interest being NSFW scenes aren't the main focus of the story, hoping this VN would really come out at it's best!!!!
After catching up with the story, I can now officially state a few things :
- Marrow is definitively the DILF of the year
- Artemi is one hell of a cinnamon roll, and she's super funny to tease
- Ilia is best mom
- Hamish best dad
- Grank is precious and also a DILF
- Noodle is the cutest nope rope I've ever seen, I wanna pet him
I definitively grew fond of the characters in this story, they're really well-written and lovable (except that old witch of a bishop, she's almost on par with the two elder cunts from Far Beyond the World)
My favourite's still Marrow however, definitively a great character in every manner (and I can't say I don't have a thing for mercenaries since Iron Bull is one of my fav characters)
I just saw the retweet on Shirokoi's Twitter of Malus concept art and I find it so funny he's just a noodle now, I'm sure he'll get his glow up someday but I still want him to stay a cute little noodle
So... I just finished the scene where we first meet Agatha and... um...
Spoilers and Wild Mass Guessing below:
Is... is Cole actually Marrow AND Hamish's biological kid and not just Marrow's? Because ngl, I was kind of enjoying the whole "you're not my real dad" dynamic Cole had going with Hamish and making him Hamish's biological kid kind of ruins that. It's a fairly cheap way to resolve the conflict in Hamish and Cole's whole sort of "son not liking his step-dad" relationship and opens up a number of rather uncomfortable questions. Like, why wouldn't Marrow and Hamish just TELL Cole this when he was younger? Cole makes no secret of the fact that he thinks of Hamish as "Dad's killjoy boyfriend" instead of "Dad #2" and it makes Marrow out to be a really shitty partner if he didn't step in and clear this matter up for all these years. I just can't see Marrow doing that considering what I've seen of him.
Basically, I hope I'm wrong and just overthinking things. There's clearly something magical about Cole's origins based on what Agnes said, but what is still unknown and I really hope it isn't what I think it is.
Okay so I just got past this scene and I have an actual theory :
Marrow and Hamish are indeed Cole's biological dads
It wouldn't surprise me if Marrow really desired a son with Hamish, but since they're both males, he had to find another, unorthodox, method. He might have learned of the existence of a certain magic/spell that permits that and stole it from Agatha's lab
Thus, Cole was born. But maybe the disease he got during his childhood and leaving him weakened for the rest of his life was a result of his rather particular birth conditions.
Marrow might feel especially guilty, thinking it was because of him that his son ended up weak and not strong like him.
That would also be a reason why he despises magic so much (this and maybe something that happened with his sister)
I really love this game so far, both the story telling and character building are great af, had me in tears a couple times actually haha. It has been a pleasant journey so far cuz i don't see myself rushing the story to any NSFW scences like other games lol. I'm looking forward to your work in the future!
...Holy crap. A gay nsfw Furry VN that happens to have a female protagonist! (Or, one of the protagonists at any rate.) I never thought I'd see the day!
Aaaw thank you! Writing for Artemi is pretty fun since I don't have to worry about any romantic direction when she's with Cole or Sidd. Gives her character a lot more room to breathe :3
Does anyone know where the music comes from? Because both this VN and Repeat have AMAZING soundtracks and I would love to follow the artist(s) who makes the songs.
this game is so much fun and when it comes to character development or story-writing, the author made a stunning work. The art and the music made such an enjoyable ambiance. i had a few giggles and of course i shed a few tears. I really love what came out from this game, i just can't wait for the release of the whole game.
hoiw do we go about launching the game? im using winzip and it tells me it can't execute the launch command saying something about it missing. any suggestions?
Damn, another fun game to enjoy while I wait for Owen's story to be updated. Oh, and I'll never forgive you if you work yourself to death trying to meet the update demands or your more impatient fans.
I don't know who's being updated. I just mentioned Owen's name because I'm mostly invested in his story. Sissel is the second one I want to see finished and finally Phillip.
Sissel's route is almost done, Owen's route is about a third done, I think? Aaaand Phillip's... route does not have a day 10 yet due to reasons I might know.
Damnnnn, even if there are no choices (not that I know of since i just finished chapter 1) the story and the game is so damn good, the characters are amazingly written too
The spells and their effects are very well made too and the music is so good
← Return to game
Comments
Log in with itch.io to leave a comment.
i cant wait for a new update im so attached to the characters and wonder when we could see a continuation?
probably in around a month or so, considering the distance between past updates
this one will be much longer, the devs are spending this year on their other project, Repeat, then they'll be swapping back and forth (from what I can tell
repeat is on hiatus
their twitter says that theyre working on repeat
Betsy the frog, ultimate evil, I'm calling it.
Betsy the toad (thank you very much) is wise and of unshakably good character, they’d never commit evil acts
I think it’s obvious Betsy will be the true hero of the story, saving the day at the most opportune moment
Thank you. I will not stand for any Betsy slander >:U
Dude, your works are totally lit
A bit gay but still great XD. I do like how you draw the characters, the personality also fits properly (man, I could say it has the vibe of an anime series)
I'm not seeing any other moves yet like story track shifts aside from narration but it's still quite nice to see how you make each chapter neat.
A bit surprised by how artemi changed within three days, maybe the change was too fast? Her usual meekness is totally gone when the third day struck
Nonetheless, I know you have reasons to why there's a personality spurt
Being stuck with the two guys she was stuck with? It makes sense that she'd have to step up to keep them from getting themselves killed
Extreme circumstances often have extreme results. Artemi was incredibly sheltered , full of self-doubts because being the creator was the only thing she really had going for her. Suddenly meeting two people who don't shower her with praise just for being the creator's chosen, and them appreciating Artemi for who she is would change her quite quickly. They found her lightning magic pretty awesome, whereas before, her lightning magic was a source of doubt for her (since the other chosen ones weren't tempest mages).
Is there a way to skip to a specific chapter for example if you deleted it and installed it again?
I plan on adding a Chapter Select function in a future update but there's currently none in-game at the moment. Sorry! QWQ/
I hope everyone has a good New Years!! 😃😃😃
In my opinion I think Hamish is the best dad. Marrow is aware of his flaws in parenting and that puts him in close second in my book. 🙂🙂
Shirokoi please don't kill them off please!!! 😫😫😫
oh my, I love hamish too.. he's the best!
A lot of music from this game sounds almost identical to the ones on the game Transformice.
Coincidence or it's the same composer?
I’m not sure about it but I think some of it is royalty free music, so it’s perfectly possible another game used the same tracks
The story is great so far. Little nitpick for Malus (on Android at least, I don't know for other releases), his sprite is too low and his face keeps getting hidden behind the text box.
Keep up the good work! I really like your characters, none of them feels "one dimensional" to me, or those that did were shown to have deeper personalities in a twist of events.
Happy Holidays everyone!! 😃😃😃😃😃
Please the writing and timing in this is so funny and compelling I love everyone. 😭
After playing, i really loved how this game has gone far, the storyline is great and heartwarming (though the concept is used very fondly throughout the chapters) overall it's very great and i can't wait to reach the plot of the story!!! There's a few downside regarding with the sound effects (particularly the volume and tone of the effects) it would really be great to change them with more not-so-dramatic ones or just simply change their volume so people like me won't get jumpscared in the middle of the scenes.
Best of luck for the development of the VN, it has really struck my interest being NSFW scenes aren't the main focus of the story, hoping this VN would really come out at it's best!!!!
I AM THE GREAT NOODLE
BOW BEFORE ME
EXCEPT FOR THAT ONE WISE FROG
After catching up with the story, I can now officially state a few things :
- Marrow is definitively the DILF of the year
- Artemi is one hell of a cinnamon roll, and she's super funny to tease
- Ilia is best mom
- Hamish best dad
- Grank is precious and also a DILF
- Noodle is the cutest nope rope I've ever seen, I wanna pet him
I definitively grew fond of the characters in this story, they're really well-written and lovable (except that old witch of a bishop, she's almost on par with the two elder cunts from Far Beyond the World)
My favourite's still Marrow however, definitively a great character in every manner (and I can't say I don't have a thing for mercenaries since Iron Bull is one of my fav characters)
Oh yeahh..
Seriously, fk Aldris - _-
Dran isn't as bad as that tubby bitsh but still-- AAA
Me, starting to play this game : Oh, this Marrow fella looks super handsome, maybe he'll be a potential love inter-
oh wait that's the MC's dad
welp, it's fanfiction time I guess
I kept seeing so many battle CGs of this VN that I decided it's probably worth playing, diving in.
Edit: I can't stop reading lol
What was the name of the bg music when...
ah--
When Calder was beaten shtless by Cole?
(Need it for a project please q wq)
Yess, where can we find the background music for this!
I saw the interaction between cole and his “ex”. And I hope to god they can get back together.😭🥺
I just saw the retweet on Shirokoi's Twitter of Malus concept art and I find it so funny he's just a noodle now, I'm sure he'll get his glow up someday but I still want him to stay a cute little noodle
I like my demons pocket-sized :3
Heya, sorry for the re-ask question, but is there a discord server for this? If so, what is the invite?
The discord server is Patreon supportors only qwq/
Okay!
So... I just finished the scene where we first meet Agatha and... um...
Spoilers and Wild Mass Guessing below:
Is... is Cole actually Marrow AND Hamish's biological kid and not just Marrow's? Because ngl, I was kind of enjoying the whole "you're not my real dad" dynamic Cole had going with Hamish and making him Hamish's biological kid kind of ruins that. It's a fairly cheap way to resolve the conflict in Hamish and Cole's whole sort of "son not liking his step-dad" relationship and opens up a number of rather uncomfortable questions. Like, why wouldn't Marrow and Hamish just TELL Cole this when he was younger? Cole makes no secret of the fact that he thinks of Hamish as "Dad's killjoy boyfriend" instead of "Dad #2" and it makes Marrow out to be a really shitty partner if he didn't step in and clear this matter up for all these years. I just can't see Marrow doing that considering what I've seen of him.
Basically, I hope I'm wrong and just overthinking things. There's clearly something magical about Cole's origins based on what Agnes said, but what is still unknown and I really hope it isn't what I think it is.
Okay so I just got past this scene and I have an actual theory :
Marrow and Hamish are indeed Cole's biological dads
It wouldn't surprise me if Marrow really desired a son with Hamish, but since they're both males, he had to find another, unorthodox, method. He might have learned of the existence of a certain magic/spell that permits that and stole it from Agatha's lab
Thus, Cole was born. But maybe the disease he got during his childhood and leaving him weakened for the rest of his life was a result of his rather particular birth conditions.
Marrow might feel especially guilty, thinking it was because of him that his son ended up weak and not strong like him.
That would also be a reason why he despises magic so much (this and maybe something that happened with his sister)
I really love this game so far, both the story telling and character building are great af, had me in tears a couple times actually haha. It has been a pleasant journey so far cuz i don't see myself rushing the story to any NSFW scences like other games lol. I'm looking forward to your work in the future!
I got to the scene where the trio have lunch with Sidd's mom and I want Ilia to adopt Artemi and pull out that broken bottle on Katrina.
Ilia giving Katrina the Calder treatment? Hell yes!!
Hey Creator are you add some NSFW stuff in next update?
horny *bonk*
...Holy crap. A gay nsfw Furry VN that happens to have a female protagonist! (Or, one of the protagonists at any rate.) I never thought I'd see the day!
Aaaw thank you! Writing for Artemi is pretty fun since I don't have to worry about any romantic direction when she's with Cole or Sidd. Gives her character a lot more room to breathe :3
Don't forget that she's not in skimpy clothes, like other female protagonists usually are.... 😐😐😑😑
But they're men in skimpy clothing. You don't see that ANYWHERE. 😘😘😘
My new favorite VN ever! Why did I wait so long to play? Agh! Is there a discord server for this? I NEED ONE AAAAAAAAAAAAA
its for the patrons
:)
Ty!
Does anyone know where the music comes from? Because both this VN and Repeat have AMAZING soundtracks and I would love to follow the artist(s) who makes the songs.
Just read the new chapter, Awesome OwO!
and one side note.... Hamish could totally be Hawkeye's fursona xD
Oh hell yes an update
So Good!
oh my fucking god i forgot to follow and almost missed this update, thank you nervous checking habit
Ooh noice, an updoot
- A smol updoot but has a lot of content which is enough to satisfy until the next one. This one never failed to be one of my favorites ^ w^
that was an amazing update. already excited for the next, and ready to wait however long it may take
Do we get to see Sidd and Cole have sex yet?
That was already in it. You can get it when Cole is showing them around the Guild house (I think that's what it's called).
Specifically, the supply closet
Spoilers:
All I could say during the fight is: GO HAMISH GO!!!!!!!!!
Eyyyy tysm shiro, I've been waiting for this update
where should i begin.
this game is so much fun and when it comes to character development or story-writing, the author made a stunning work. The art and the music made such an enjoyable ambiance. i had a few giggles and of course i shed a few tears. I really love what came out from this game, i just can't wait for the release of the whole game.
hoiw do we go about launching the game? im using winzip and it tells me it can't execute the launch command saying something about it missing. any suggestions?
if you havent fixed it yet, try right clicking and run as admin, or run in japanese
Damn, another fun game to enjoy while I wait for Owen's story to be updated. Oh, and I'll never forgive you if you work yourself to death trying to meet the update demands or your more impatient fans.
The next update will be Owen's?
Heard there was a Samuel scene as well but dunno where.. yet.
I don't know who's being updated. I just mentioned Owen's name because I'm mostly invested in his story. Sissel is the second one I want to see finished and finally Phillip.
Sissel's route is almost done, Owen's route is about a third done, I think? Aaaand Phillip's... route does not have a day 10 yet
due to reasons I might know.Damnnnn, even if there are no choices (not that I know of since i just finished chapter 1) the story and the game is so damn good, the characters are amazingly written too
The spells and their effects are very well made too and the music is so good