A surprisingly good visual novel. Nice work. Hope your affairs are in order and the writing process is smooth.
I think my only complaints are regarding some of the word choice... "going ham" for instance....yes I can tell this was written by a zoomer. You could of used going wild, crazy, all out, I dunno, the english lexicon is huge, instances where you use very modern grammar is just... it takes me out of the world and reminds me this is a furry novel....
Ah well, could be worse, you didn't have a character saying lol at least...
hmmmmmmm, im pretty sure i heard artemi and cole's themes before. some chinese and japanese songs respectively if im not wrong. im SUPER curious as how shirokoi got the rights to use them. And also i wanna know WHERE those specific versions of the songs came from, i REALLY want to download them to my phone's music list, they soound soooooo good!
but seriously tho, I’m super curious as to how shirokoi got the rights, if he did. STILL cant find the original songs, I KNOW I heard them somewhere. And I really want to know where those versions used in the game came from
I think hes doing reworks for some / most of the characters, so its taking a bit longer than normal. But hes been working on it more or less since the last update for this game.
I never get so worked up in a visual novel (furry ones, at least) before. This is just a pure masterpiece. Sure, the story is linear with little nsfw scenes, but it's nothing compared to the amazingly written story! The jokes are right on spot and all those emotional build ups are heavenly, not to mention the characters' character developments as well. This is obviously placed on my all time favorite vn list!
(Kinda hoping this would someday be adapted into a full-length animated series too tbh, it's just that good)
i just finished and WOW this was AMAZING i was totally immersed in the story and the characters are just the best. i got super emotionally involved in this and there were definitely moment where i sobbed my heart out 5 stars 10/10 def up there on my favorite vns.
I just binged this over the course of a few days. The characters are all so loveable in their own ways, and the bird mom had me laughing many times. This is a great story, I look forward to more in the future.
The problem is likely on your end since no one else had that issue that I can see of.
Make sure you have the correct game version for your operating system. Make sure you open it in 32 or 64 bit system depending on your specs again. If needed, run the app as administrator. If you still have problems try creating an exception for the game on your anti virus (sometimes the anti virus programs love to whack safe apps. 99.999% sure there are no viruses in this download. you may have to restart your computer or download the whole game over again if your AV irreparably damaged the game. Just make sure to turn off your AV while it downloads, make the exception ((restart if needed to take effect)), and turn your AV back on so you dont forget after youre done reading).
Renpy also uses graphics, game/mouse/keyboard and sound/voice drivers. Try restarting/updating your drivers on your device manager. They tend to break or need an update to run newer apps sometimes.
If none of these solutions work then IDK what could be wrong. These are the usual problems people have when using Renpy.
So far i really enjoyed the game. The characters are really well made. There is a lot of character growth especially with Cole. The story in this fantasy medieval era is amazing. that Visual Novel and the other one you and your team are working on, repeat, are amazing. Im just in love with your work
Welp, she's there for a reason. Personally, I don't mind her not getting any. I think she's gonna be that one person who supports the team wholeheartedly and doesn't pay much mind of the romantic relationship happening as long as they're still on good terms and teamwork. Knowing that Arty is kinda fond of those "literatures" in the guild's library, she will come to an understanding and greater interest, probably. Fujoshi, that's what she's becoming to xixixi.
Nevertheless, let's just see what plans our creator has for her. Cheers!
I kinda wish they dont make a scene for her. Shes likable in an innocent comedic relief character-development way. Adding NSFW scenes for her feels like shoehorning it and something her character cant come back from.
yeah its already sad to see how she lost a part of her innocents do to coles behavior even though she probably needed to grow a little . but lets not rob her of the rest she has.
Isn't she like literally a child? And even if she is of age, her exposure and attitude to the real world is much too limited in terms of maturity for her to even be thinking about that anyway
i don't see that game as an nsfw game. of course they are a few scenes but like its mostly focused on the story rather than the nsfw side. Of course cole has its sex jokes and stuff by thats just its character
this one will be much longer, the devs are spending this year on their other project, Repeat, then they'll be swapping back and forth (from what I can tell
A bit gay but still great XD. I do like how you draw the characters, the personality also fits properly (man, I could say it has the vibe of an anime series)
I'm not seeing any other moves yet like story track shifts aside from narration but it's still quite nice to see how you make each chapter neat.
A bit surprised by how artemi changed within three days, maybe the change was too fast? Her usual meekness is totally gone when the third day struck
Nonetheless, I know you have reasons to why there's a personality spurt
Extreme circumstances often have extreme results. Artemi was incredibly sheltered , full of self-doubts because being the creator was the only thing she really had going for her. Suddenly meeting two people who don't shower her with praise just for being the creator's chosen, and them appreciating Artemi for who she is would change her quite quickly. They found her lightning magic pretty awesome, whereas before, her lightning magic was a source of doubt for her (since the other chosen ones weren't tempest mages).
The story is great so far. Little nitpick for Malus (on Android at least, I don't know for other releases), his sprite is too low and his face keeps getting hidden behind the text box.
Keep up the good work! I really like your characters, none of them feels "one dimensional" to me, or those that did were shown to have deeper personalities in a twist of events.
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A surprisingly good visual novel. Nice work. Hope your affairs are in order and the writing process is smooth.
I think my only complaints are regarding some of the word choice... "going ham" for instance....yes I can tell this was written by a zoomer. You could of used going wild, crazy, all out, I dunno, the english lexicon is huge, instances where you use very modern grammar is just... it takes me out of the world and reminds me this is a furry novel....
Ah well, could be worse, you didn't have a character saying lol at least...
by "it's very gay", does that include female x female action
So far as it is right now, the answer seems to be: Nope.
Amem
When are we going to see a update. I really like this novel
someone needs to do a Temptations Ballad version of the Jujutsu Kaisen ED Lost In Paradise
and the characters will be like;
Yuji: Cole
Fushiguro: Sidd
Nobara: Artemi
Gojo: Hamish or Marrow
I think it will turn out so good
who knew a furry visual novel gave good life lessons
we need more recognition for furry visual novels
I'm sorry if this has been answered elsewhere, but is the game dead/hiatus? I thought I saw that Repeat was but id
I'd say look at their twitter. Repeat is being revamped so theyre focusing on it for now
I feel like a few characters need rework like side otherwise amazing game.
hmmmmmmm, im pretty sure i heard artemi and cole's themes before. some chinese and japanese songs respectively if im not wrong. im SUPER curious as how shirokoi got the rights to use them. And also i wanna know WHERE those specific versions of the songs came from, i REALLY want to download them to my phone's music list, they soound soooooo good!
"you don't need the rights if no one knows" jk ;)
but seriously tho, I’m super curious as to how shirokoi got the rights, if he did. STILL cant find the original songs, I KNOW I heard them somewhere. And I really want to know where those versions used in the game came from
Loved it By the way Is this A cancelled Project its been a long time since updated It'll a bit sad if this was cancelled.
their focus is on repeat right now, but the update will likely come soon
It's been two years since the last update. Where are you getting this info?
look at their twitter
I think hes doing reworks for some / most of the characters, so its taking a bit longer than normal. But hes been working on it more or less since the last update for this game.
I never get so worked up in a visual novel (furry ones, at least) before. This is just a pure masterpiece. Sure, the story is linear with little nsfw scenes, but it's nothing compared to the amazingly written story! The jokes are right on spot and all those emotional build ups are heavenly, not to mention the characters' character developments as well. This is obviously placed on my all time favorite vn list!
(Kinda hoping this would someday be adapted into a full-length animated series too tbh, it's just that good)
i just finished and WOW this was AMAZING i was totally immersed in the story and the characters are just the best. i got super emotionally involved in this and there were definitely moment where i sobbed my heart out 5 stars 10/10 def up there on my favorite vns.
it downloads but no icon on my home screen and doesn't open please help
artemi is so precious i'm obsessed
I just binged this over the course of a few days. The characters are all so loveable in their own ways, and the bird mom had me laughing many times. This is a great story, I look forward to more in the future.
same. Man i can't wait. the characters are really awesome. and I look forward for more bird mom scene and more Hamish scene
SPOILER BELOW
they better end up together
The fact the demon snake almost died to a Twink
Every time I get to that part I instantly think of Samuel L. Jackson saying "get that mf"
I just finished chapter 3 and that was an absolute masterpiece! I can't wait to see what's in store for our adventurers. Good things hopefully.
Does anybody know when the next update is getting an public release?
likely within the month
Don't change her one bit she is perfect the way she is
She's grown too powerful. I can't change birb mom even if I want to.
Oh boy, the looks I got for my laughter at that scene.... no regrets, she's fantastic.
me running from my responsibilities like
Sidd cute :3
agree
when is the next update coming
10 months?
Such a supportive father. But I love the bird-mom best.
Unfuckingbelievable. gobsmacked mate, cannot believe just how damned good this is. Shirokoi, you are amazing!
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Things are no longer nice. Get off my lawn >:U
nice
"Okay grandpa". Get the reference? 😂😂😂
What date you release the next update I'm so excited
Hey I was wondering how long usually does it take to release the build?
usually two months, but it will likely take longer due to them working on their other projec
What other project?
repeat
I'm aware of repeat. Glad it's not a third one.
The problem is likely on your end since no one else had that issue that I can see of.
Make sure you have the correct game version for your operating system. Make sure you open it in 32 or 64 bit system depending on your specs again. If needed, run the app as administrator. If you still have problems try creating an exception for the game on your anti virus (sometimes the anti virus programs love to whack safe apps. 99.999% sure there are no viruses in this download. you may have to restart your computer or download the whole game over again if your AV irreparably damaged the game. Just make sure to turn off your AV while it downloads, make the exception ((restart if needed to take effect)), and turn your AV back on so you dont forget after youre done reading).
Renpy also uses graphics, game/mouse/keyboard and sound/voice drivers. Try restarting/updating your drivers on your device manager. They tend to break or need an update to run newer apps sometimes.
If none of these solutions work then IDK what could be wrong. These are the usual problems people have when using Renpy.
So far i really enjoyed the game. The characters are really well made. There is a lot of character growth especially with Cole. The story in this fantasy medieval era is amazing. that Visual Novel and the other one you and your team are working on, repeat, are amazing. Im just in love with your work
Welp, she's there for a reason. Personally, I don't mind her not getting any. I think she's gonna be that one person who supports the team wholeheartedly and doesn't pay much mind of the romantic relationship happening as long as they're still on good terms and teamwork. Knowing that Arty is kinda fond of those "literatures" in the guild's library, she will come to an understanding and greater interest, probably. Fujoshi, that's what she's becoming to xixixi.
Nevertheless, let's just see what plans our creator has for her. Cheers!
I mean.....
That library scene is probably hinting at something
I kinda wish they dont make a scene for her. Shes likable in an innocent comedic relief character-development way. Adding NSFW scenes for her feels like shoehorning it and something her character cant come back from.
yeah its already sad to see how she lost a part of her innocents do to coles behavior even though she probably needed to grow a little . but lets not rob her of the rest she has.
Isn't she like literally a child? And even if she is of age, her exposure and attitude to the real world is much too limited in terms of maturity for her to even be thinking about that anyway
i don't see that game as an nsfw game. of course they are a few scenes but like its mostly focused on the story rather than the nsfw side. Of course cole has its sex jokes and stuff by thats just its character
arty is a innocent character except at the library hehe
Betsy is the best waifu ever - caring, supportive, toad, best listener, ribbit.
How to just return to 2019
i cant wait for a new update im so attached to the characters and wonder when we could see a continuation?
probably in around a month or so, considering the distance between past updates
this one will be much longer, the devs are spending this year on their other project, Repeat, then they'll be swapping back and forth (from what I can tell
repeat is on hiatus
their twitter says that theyre working on repeat
Betsy the frog, ultimate evil, I'm calling it.
Betsy the toad (thank you very much) is wise and of unshakably good character, they’d never commit evil acts
I think it’s obvious Betsy will be the true hero of the story, saving the day at the most opportune moment
Thank you. I will not stand for any Betsy slander >:U
Dude, your works are totally lit
A bit gay but still great XD. I do like how you draw the characters, the personality also fits properly (man, I could say it has the vibe of an anime series)
I'm not seeing any other moves yet like story track shifts aside from narration but it's still quite nice to see how you make each chapter neat.
A bit surprised by how artemi changed within three days, maybe the change was too fast? Her usual meekness is totally gone when the third day struck
Nonetheless, I know you have reasons to why there's a personality spurt
Being stuck with the two guys she was stuck with? It makes sense that she'd have to step up to keep them from getting themselves killed
Extreme circumstances often have extreme results. Artemi was incredibly sheltered , full of self-doubts because being the creator was the only thing she really had going for her. Suddenly meeting two people who don't shower her with praise just for being the creator's chosen, and them appreciating Artemi for who she is would change her quite quickly. They found her lightning magic pretty awesome, whereas before, her lightning magic was a source of doubt for her (since the other chosen ones weren't tempest mages).
Is there a way to skip to a specific chapter for example if you deleted it and installed it again?
I plan on adding a Chapter Select function in a future update but there's currently none in-game at the moment. Sorry! QWQ/
I hope everyone has a good New Years!! 😃😃😃
In my opinion I think Hamish is the best dad. Marrow is aware of his flaws in parenting and that puts him in close second in my book. 🙂🙂
Shirokoi please don't kill them off please!!! 😫😫😫
oh my, I love hamish too.. he's the best!
A lot of music from this game sounds almost identical to the ones on the game Transformice.
Coincidence or it's the same composer?
I’m not sure about it but I think some of it is royalty free music, so it’s perfectly possible another game used the same tracks
The story is great so far. Little nitpick for Malus (on Android at least, I don't know for other releases), his sprite is too low and his face keeps getting hidden behind the text box.
Keep up the good work! I really like your characters, none of them feels "one dimensional" to me, or those that did were shown to have deeper personalities in a twist of events.