This game is just perfect. Especially in terms of story. Didn't expect such deep lore but it is AMAZING. And I hope you're gonna add more to this game very soon. I started playing like a week ago and I'm completely addicted. And out of all the story and visual novel games I've played, this game got me in tears. Their struggles couldn't have been more relatable than this. I'm looking forward to see this game getting finished, good luck! Also, a question, have many chapters are you planning to make in total?
Thank you for the kind words! I'm planning around 12 to 15 chapters for the entirety of TB's story, but that's kinda subject to change as the project progresses.
Hey, kinda stupid question but are you releasing updates by chapter or by piece of chapter? or does it just depend [kinda found this vn after it got updated to the state it is in rn, aka after graphics overhaul; basically got kind of hooked on this one because it's so cool, all the characters fulfill some kind of role and all, the main cast is so wow in general]
I absolutely ADORE this game, it is already my favorite visual novel despite my hunch that it isn't even CLOSE to being finished. I would go into extreme detail about what I love with each character and the scene progression, but this is not the place to write spoilers, so I'll stay general.
First off, the game's concept and plot are amazing thus far. I LOVE your spin of the D&D medieval trope and how fluidly you execute clever comedic points along with serious moments as well. The creativity behind so many of the scenes within this novel is baffling, and a few also got me close to crying a few times.
Every character is unique and developed so that their actions make sense, making emotional moments that much more powerful, it even makes the humorous moments funnier as well. There are also so many adorable moments that I still cannot get enough of.
A little more specific, but the parental influence and relationships are all incredibly executed. You have it down to a T for certain parent-child dynamics and how it affects the child. I recognize your dedication to this part of each character's development very gratefully.
I am so so thrilled about the resuming of this vn's development, I have been eagerly waiting for it since the pausing for Repeat's focus. Shiro, you have an incredible story going here that presses all the right buttons, and I look forward to future updates.
Sidd and Cole haven’t trained or delved too deep into their Fighter/Bard classes, so they haven’t committed to a subclass yet. This will change as the story progresses.
I mean, so far in the 150,000 word script there are a total of 3 sex scenes, all of which are skippable and I even made the effort the add character moments in those scenes.
I understand that not everyone is comfortable with sex in their media, but not all media is made for everyone and that’s okay.
Hey, man, I was wondering if the work is back up to date? I have only recently come across this work and have finished the second chapter. It was really good, but I was disappointed to see it down to the last chapter. I really love it and would love to see it updated. Anyway, thank you for letting me read such a beautiful story.
I think that the developer just finished the first route on their other game, "Repeat" ( I HIGHLY HIGHLY recommend playing it!), and I think they have shift their focus over to this game for the time being! (not 100% sure tho)
I think he did say that he's going to work on TB for a bit more and pushing out updates to this VN (I think that's what I really remembered?) so yes it's kinda back from hiatus and back up to date
One of my favorite VNs. Calling it an underrated gem might be inaccurate, since it's pretty high on the top-rated page-- but it deserves so much more attention than it has. Great action-comedy. Puts you off guard, then hits you with seriously well-constructed emotional beats. I recommend this to everyone I know, and anxiously await its return.
Alright I got a small request, since the app is unstable on my phone, I decided to run it on the JoiPay app (it worked) but to hide the text, I gotta use the small wheel, which is the only button that's not available on the gamepad settings 💀 is it possible to add a lil hide button in there? Clicking on the left side could unhide it too
Pfft! Well, it's just the orca guy remembering him after fighting Sidd in the arena. (if I remember correctly, since it's been about a year since I played it)
You did not disappoint some of us lol you confused us with the orca flash back thinking it was the father of sidd that fought the same orca before sidd did
I'm not an expert in DnD, but I doubt he would be level 10. He just started being an adventurer and has no weapon training. If anything, he is probably level 1 by default
Finally took the time to read the visual novel from chapters 1 to 3. Looking forward to any future updates.
Overall, it's a very wonderful fantasy story. Interesting fantasy worldbuilding. Tender, occasionally sobering, often funny, and... optimistic.
The main trio are sympathetic and unique in their own ways, but they really shine when they bounce off each other and the colorful supporting cast. I find the character dynamics to be very compelling and well-written. Plenty of humor on the side, such as the 'reading it for the plot' gag, Sidd's harem, plus everything to do with Sidd's mom having a super hardcore renegade bard past (and present). Plus the pompous Carter guy who swiftly got beat up by Cole, Artemi and Sidd's mother (I hope he sticks around as a comic side character on the side. Can't say I wish the same for the street urchin, all things considered. That kid's long overdue for some slapstick.)
Cole's archetype (charming, flirty bard guy who is super casual about physical intimacy because he's just as equally against anything to do emotional stuff, much like his dads in that regard) isn't exactly new compared to certain prominent characters from to Critical Role / Vox Machina or Helluva Boss... but I really like Cole's role in the story because his best moments come from bouncing off of Sidd and Artemi. Didn't find Vox Machina or Helluva Boss to be super compelling in that regard (with B x S being 80% horny and 20% drama), but I like how it was used in Temptation's Ballad. Sidd's earnest nature was enough to nudge Cole into stepping in the role of a responsible leader and mentor (I doubt that Cole would have stopped to help just anyone read using bardic imagery), and Artemi was... the first person, narratively wise, who firmly shoved Cole into taking the additional steps of that better path when she yelled at him and threatened to punch him for wanting to abandon Sidd in chapter 1. Considering all of the baggage Cole had regarding his fathers and himself (given that one of them was the fun dad so the other had to be the nagging house-dad), Artemi really broke through his inward-facing melancholy in a way that nobody else did before then.
Sidd is a relatable character with understandable fears and struggles that come from a humble mind with a humble upbringing. It could be said that he has... slightly less baggage than the rest of the team, but that doesn't mean his feelings are any less important. He's already come a long way, mentally and emotionally, over the course of the three chapters, and it was becuase fate put him on a crash course with two unlikely non-frog friends. He found the will and the resolve to harness the physical strength he already had to begin with, he's made a great number of friends and acquaintances, and he's also acted as a stabilizing positive influence for Cole and Artemi.
And... I really like Artemi. Noble crusader with a huge dorky side... I'm fairly certain it's been done often enough, but I haven't seen a crusader who really stuck out in the sea of fantasy literature. Not since Lalatina Ford Dustiness, and she's mostly a designated gag character. Artemi's very passionate about chivalry and duty... and is thus the source of countless gags where her sheltered worldview clashes with everyone she meets and everything she witnesses. Especially the adults only library section. And as much as Cole pushes Artemi out of her comfort zone, she was very quick to start pushing back in funny ways once she got to know him better. Through Cole and Sidd and their families, Artemi gained a very strong and supportive network to lean on, and I wish her the best with her personal journey.
TB is currently being worked on! There's been a few small QOL updates on the Patreon that include a UI overhaul, gallery menu, and some other small tidbits. They will be available to the public in about a month or so!
Im just thinking. What if the house of shannesy or whatever guy gets an inn. But its the bone breaker tavern. And im just thinking about what if this happened. anyways good story staple of approval
For anyone wondering about the status of this Visual Novel, I'm here to tell you some information.
Yes, the development of this is still in hiatus. The developer is currently finishing up the last major content update for one of the character routes in their other Visual Novel, Repeat. (Although it should be noted that it will likely come out first for patrons of their Patreon, and non-subscribers will be an update behind in comparison.)
However, let it be known, that the moment the update for Repeat is completed, Shirokoi plans to resume their work on Temptations Ballad. They have many things in store for us.
Don't worry, development is NOT dead, just on hold, and it will pick up once their current project is finished. For now, if you're still antsy from waiting, try reading Repeat. It is also a great Visual Novel to enjoy.
I mean the bat lady said that one of his fathers broke in her lab that night and stole something, I don't quite remember anything but I think she said about creating life or stuff like that
it's implied that it's a plot point that'll be expanded upon later. remember the bat lady (I forget her name)? she was studying that sort of stuff, and it's implied that Cole's conception is the result of her research
My guess is Cole's dad has just sprayed sperm on the magic egg like how fish fertilize eggs. Cole's dad whom he got DNA from probably is Hamish since the two look somewhat identical plus both Hamish and Cole can do magic.
Plot, humor, characters, animations — everything is of such high quality, it feels a bit unreal tbh. Shirokoi definitely makes some of the best content I've seen here on itch.
I think he mentioned something about working on this game sorta soon? I'd hope that it's going to be worked on within a year but it might take a bit longer.
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This game is just perfect. Especially in terms of story. Didn't expect such deep lore but it is AMAZING. And I hope you're gonna add more to this game very soon. I started playing like a week ago and I'm completely addicted. And out of all the story and visual novel games I've played, this game got me in tears. Their struggles couldn't have been more relatable than this. I'm looking forward to see this game getting finished, good luck! Also, a question, have many chapters are you planning to make in total?
Thank you for the kind words! I'm planning around 12 to 15 chapters for the entirety of TB's story, but that's kinda subject to change as the project progresses.
Hey, kinda stupid question but are you releasing updates by chapter or by piece of chapter? or does it just depend [kinda found this vn after it got updated to the state it is in rn, aka after graphics overhaul; basically got kind of hooked on this one because it's so cool, all the characters fulfill some kind of role and all, the main cast is so wow in general]
I'm currently releasing updates bit by bit, optimistically aiming for once every 1.5 months or so, though smaller updates may come out faster.
noice
I absolutely ADORE this game, it is already my favorite visual novel despite my hunch that it isn't even CLOSE to being finished. I would go into extreme detail about what I love with each character and the scene progression, but this is not the place to write spoilers, so I'll stay general.
First off, the game's concept and plot are amazing thus far. I LOVE your spin of the D&D medieval trope and how fluidly you execute clever comedic points along with serious moments as well. The creativity behind so many of the scenes within this novel is baffling, and a few also got me close to crying a few times.
Every character is unique and developed so that their actions make sense, making emotional moments that much more powerful, it even makes the humorous moments funnier as well. There are also so many adorable moments that I still cannot get enough of.
A little more specific, but the parental influence and relationships are all incredibly executed. You have it down to a T for certain parent-child dynamics and how it affects the child. I recognize your dedication to this part of each character's development very gratefully.
I am so so thrilled about the resuming of this vn's development, I have been eagerly waiting for it since the pausing for Repeat's focus. Shiro, you have an incredible story going here that presses all the right buttons, and I look forward to future updates.
Do Cole or Sidd have subclasses?
The Chapter 1 character glossary doesn't include the subclasses, unlike the ones from chapter 2 and 3
We know Artemi is a Tempest Domain Cleric and Oath of Devotion Paladin, even though it isn't mentioned in the glossary
Sidd and Cole haven’t trained or delved too deep into their Fighter/Bard classes, so they haven’t committed to a subclass yet. This will change as the story progresses.
Have you considered making a completely SFW build/version of the game? I wanna recommend it to people but it's kinda hard when it has so much gay sex
I mean, so far in the 150,000 word script there are a total of 3 sex scenes, all of which are skippable and I even made the effort the add character moments in those scenes.
I understand that not everyone is comfortable with sex in their media, but not all media is made for everyone and that’s okay.
I understand, it's just that I feel like I'd die of embarassment if I recomended this to people and I really want to!
Then perish!
from embarrassment!
nah but seriously it is skippable, which is actually a cool little mechanic
one of my friends recommended me The Boys. There's probably more wieners in that than this lol
The amount of nudity and sex scenes in modern media would dwarf the few scenes we have here 😂 they'll be fiiine
Hey, man, I was wondering if the work is back up to date? I have only recently come across this work and have finished the second chapter. It was really good, but I was disappointed to see it down to the last chapter. I really love it and would love to see it updated. Anyway, thank you for letting me read such a beautiful story.
Sorry, English is not my native language, I hope the translator did not misinterpret my meaning.
I think that the developer just finished the first route on their other game, "Repeat" ( I HIGHLY HIGHLY recommend playing it!), and I think they have shift their focus over to this game for the time being! (not 100% sure tho)
I think he did say that he's going to work on TB for a bit more and pushing out updates to this VN (I think that's what I really remembered?) so yes it's kinda back from hiatus and back up to date
The existing NSFW scenes in the game would have animation
the first substory has an animated one.
I just happened to check back on this today and we're SO back omg
Hmm, something seems wrong here-
Ah sorry, this is a known bug that has been fixed in the next build on Patreon qwq
It's alive..... ITS FU***** ALIVE!!!!!!!!
https://temptationsballad.fandom.com/wiki/Temptation%27s_Ballad_Wiki
please help contribute to the fanwiki
Thank you for an update
One of my favorite VNs. Calling it an underrated gem might be inaccurate, since it's pretty high on the top-rated page-- but it deserves so much more attention than it has. Great action-comedy. Puts you off guard, then hits you with seriously well-constructed emotional beats. I recommend this to everyone I know, and anxiously await its return.
Alright I got a small request, since the app is unstable on my phone, I decided to run it on the JoiPay app (it worked) but to hide the text, I gotta use the small wheel, which is the only button that's not available on the gamepad settings 💀 is it possible to add a lil hide button in there? Clicking on the left side could unhide it too
Is there a button to hide the text?
You just need to press that scroll wheel
Ty
This feature has been added in the latest update!
Wooo!! Thank you
In DnD terms what level is everyone
Artemi can upcast dispell magic to level 4
Cole i think the highest spell he casted was a level 2
Sidd idk how to rate a fighter class level in DnD
Sidd is probably level 10+
That guy can beat anyone's ass to a pulp, he just needs more confidence in himself.
SPOILERS:
Can't wait to see more lore about that guy who looks like him (forgot his name ^^'). I think he might be his biological father.
the who???? did i miss an entire scene on my playthrough
Pfft! Well, it's just the orca guy remembering him after fighting Sidd in the arena. (if I remember correctly, since it's been about a year since I played it)
ohh HIM
Spoiler
It's his biological mother that shirokoi drew too masculine.
i thought it was his mom just i did not remeber
Well shit... Thanks for clarifying. I'm too gay to see boobs
I didn't notice anything myself. Just saw Shirokoi mentioning it.
I was tasked with drawing a hot woman and I think I succeeded 👍
You did not disappoint some of us lol you confused us with the orca flash back thinking it was the father of sidd that fought the same orca before sidd did
Well that was the general idea I was going for (except Mels is a woman lol) so I consider it a decent success.
In a way, yes, very much. We cannot complain, heh.
Also, can't wait to build a harem and taste every cake *perverted gay laughter*
if you mean the flashback with the orca pirate guy, that was actually his mother
I'm not an expert in DnD, but I doubt he would be level 10. He just started being an adventurer and has no weapon training. If anything, he is probably level 1 by default
I'm still replaying this, it's really fun
still honestly floored by Hamish's fight scene against Zelos, my god dad #2 is such a badass.
Finally took the time to read the visual novel from chapters 1 to 3. Looking forward to any future updates.
Overall, it's a very wonderful fantasy story. Interesting fantasy worldbuilding. Tender, occasionally sobering, often funny, and... optimistic.
The main trio are sympathetic and unique in their own ways, but they really shine when they bounce off each other and the colorful supporting cast. I find the character dynamics to be very compelling and well-written. Plenty of humor on the side, such as the 'reading it for the plot' gag, Sidd's harem, plus everything to do with Sidd's mom having a super hardcore renegade bard past (and present). Plus the pompous Carter guy who swiftly got beat up by Cole, Artemi and Sidd's mother (I hope he sticks around as a comic side character on the side. Can't say I wish the same for the street urchin, all things considered. That kid's long overdue for some slapstick.)
Cole's archetype (charming, flirty bard guy who is super casual about physical intimacy because he's just as equally against anything to do emotional stuff, much like his dads in that regard) isn't exactly new compared to certain prominent characters from to Critical Role / Vox Machina or Helluva Boss... but I really like Cole's role in the story because his best moments come from bouncing off of Sidd and Artemi. Didn't find Vox Machina or Helluva Boss to be super compelling in that regard (with B x S being 80% horny and 20% drama), but I like how it was used in Temptation's Ballad. Sidd's earnest nature was enough to nudge Cole into stepping in the role of a responsible leader and mentor (I doubt that Cole would have stopped to help just anyone read using bardic imagery), and Artemi was... the first person, narratively wise, who firmly shoved Cole into taking the additional steps of that better path when she yelled at him and threatened to punch him for wanting to abandon Sidd in chapter 1. Considering all of the baggage Cole had regarding his fathers and himself (given that one of them was the fun dad so the other had to be the nagging house-dad), Artemi really broke through his inward-facing melancholy in a way that nobody else did before then.
Sidd is a relatable character with understandable fears and struggles that come from a humble mind with a humble upbringing. It could be said that he has... slightly less baggage than the rest of the team, but that doesn't mean his feelings are any less important. He's already come a long way, mentally and emotionally, over the course of the three chapters, and it was becuase fate put him on a crash course with two unlikely non-frog friends. He found the will and the resolve to harness the physical strength he already had to begin with, he's made a great number of friends and acquaintances, and he's also acted as a stabilizing positive influence for Cole and Artemi.
And... I really like Artemi. Noble crusader with a huge dorky side... I'm fairly certain it's been done often enough, but I haven't seen a crusader who really stuck out in the sea of fantasy literature. Not since Lalatina Ford Dustiness, and she's mostly a designated gag character. Artemi's very passionate about chivalry and duty... and is thus the source of countless gags where her sheltered worldview clashes with everyone she meets and everything she witnesses. Especially the adults only library section. And as much as Cole pushes Artemi out of her comfort zone, she was very quick to start pushing back in funny ways once she got to know him better. Through Cole and Sidd and their families, Artemi gained a very strong and supportive network to lean on, and I wish her the best with her personal journey.
WE ARE STARVING PLEASE GIVE US SOMETHING
TB is currently being worked on! There's been a few small QOL updates on the Patreon that include a UI overhaul, gallery menu, and some other small tidbits. They will be available to the public in about a month or so!
THANK YOU. THANK YOUUUU! (I honestly even forgot the plot of the entire game, I just know Sidd is really cute and he should get a boyfriend)
best vn ever just like repeat frfr
Im just thinking. What if the house of shannesy or whatever guy gets an inn. But its the bone breaker tavern. And im just thinking about what if this happened. anyways good story staple of approval
hes gonna start working in TB this year after hes done fixing some spelling mistakes in Repeat
No rush tho, take your time shiro XD.
I need new updates for this so bad but I also need the lore of Phillip in Repeat AAAAAAAAAAAAA
Seriously though the only part I dislike in this so far is the bat lady's plot twist, everything else is amazing.
everything I agree with
This made me laugh, this made me cry, among other things.
Everything about this makes me very happy.
The character design.
The use of SRD content to your advantage to get a magic system most people would know, to add to a world where it WOULD make sense.
Bending some things to make them cooler/make more sense in a story.
Showing everyone's classes and stats, and fleshing out why they have them in a way that makes sense both in and out of story.
The use of music and expressions.
One very specific character being comedic gold in a way that adds, so much to them.
Mentioning that magic has traits of ones personality involved, both directly and indirectly, and showing that personality, many, MANY times.
Leaving us on a moment where we have so many questions, while answering so many more.
This is worth the wait, and I wish you luck on all your future endeavors.
Best VN I've read omg. Hope this goes off hiatus soon!
Same!!!
For anyone wondering about the status of this Visual Novel, I'm here to tell you some information.
Yes, the development of this is still in hiatus. The developer is currently finishing up the last major content update for one of the character routes in their other Visual Novel, Repeat. (Although it should be noted that it will likely come out first for patrons of their Patreon, and non-subscribers will be an update behind in comparison.)
However, let it be known, that the moment the update for Repeat is completed, Shirokoi plans to resume their work on Temptations Ballad. They have many things in store for us.
Don't worry, development is NOT dead, just on hold, and it will pick up once their current project is finished. For now, if you're still antsy from waiting, try reading Repeat. It is also a great Visual Novel to enjoy.
I hope this set you at ease.
Is it still in hiatus?
yeah:/
I really enjoyed this VN! Loved the characters and story plot. Did the development go inactive, I hope the story will continue.
Its still in development its just that shirokoi is making updates in the Repeat VN and yes he will come back here to push more chapters in
the maker is focusing on their other project. they will come back to this...at somepoint
My question, did Cole came from magic? Like, is he made from magic? No sex or whatever
Damn, good question
I mean the bat lady said that one of his fathers broke in her lab that night and stole something, I don't quite remember anything but I think she said about creating life or stuff like that
it's implied that it's a plot point that'll be expanded upon later. remember the bat lady (I forget her name)? she was studying that sort of stuff, and it's implied that Cole's conception is the result of her research
My guess is Cole's dad has just sprayed sperm on the magic egg like how fish fertilize eggs. Cole's dad whom he got DNA from probably is Hamish since the two look somewhat identical plus both Hamish and Cole can do magic.
how do you play i
One of the best FVNs I've played. Very good
I agree with the comment under mine
Just finished 2.4 Good job. Hope your other projects go well for you.
good game
When comes the next update
Plot, humor, characters, animations — everything is of such high quality, it feels a bit unreal tbh. Shirokoi definitely makes some of the best content I've seen here on itch.
RIP. Was so hoping for my dude to hook up with Sidd 😭
pllllzzzz dont tell me this vn it dead or something
Its not, the creator is working on his other vn which is Repeat, this vn is just in hiatus till the creator finishes the first vn
and how long do you expect that to take?
Probably a long time unless he decides to update the game
I think he mentioned something about working on this game sorta soon? I'd hope that it's going to be worked on within a year but it might take a bit longer.
What type of hyena is Cole? To me he looks to be either a striped hyena or an aardwolf, but I'm not sure.
Well his dad Marrow is a striped hyena. And Hamish is a spotted hyena. Take that how you will uwu
That answers my question. No further information is necessary.